Reviews for Unintended Consequences
francis2 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Oh. This squeezed my heart, hard. Great great story!
helbaffy chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
That was so beautiful! :) Such a great oneshoot! :)
RBJ12 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 did a great job with the story. I'm speechless...great job!
Red-Sox-LaLa chapter 1 . 7/22/2008

wow, beautifully written
Vampire Reader chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Thank you for this very touching story. I'm glad I found it.
moonlightfan44 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
That was so sad! I cried. I can't believe their son had to leave when he was 10 to move in with his grandmother and then dies later on! So sad. Keep going if you want.
Joanie chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
That was beautiful. Really well written. Thank you for sharing.
moonjat54 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Very well done. The true price of immortality is that you leave loved ones behind. And having a child be the one to lose is really sad. Especially since they had to leave him so early. It did sound like William had a long and happy life.
vampirelover987 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Aw, This is so sad, made me cry! Great job :)
elwren75 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
How beautifully sad. Your writing is wonderful and painfully poignant. You've really brought up some issues that I think a lot of fans gloss over when the idea of Mick, Beth and children come up. I think there's a reason that, in most vampire lore, vampires can't have children. This is why. Great job.
heavenlygrl chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Fantastic, just how I would picture it being; after all, somehow Mick and Beth would find a way to procreate!
kschwaab chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
how sad, but beautiful. poor Beth, there can be no pain greater than that of a mother having to bury her child.
RandomTVFan30 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Great story. I loved your take on the theme.
magialuna chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Very very sad, but beautiful and very well written. Thank you for sharing!
p3karen chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
That was so sad, but very well written.
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