Reviews for The Epic Adventure of Chopagash!
JP the Robot Hedgehog chapter 5 . 8/5/2008
Oh yeah! Gazpacho got served! Poor Panini. Upate soon please!
saturngirl chapter 4 . 7/29/2008
It's so frickin' funny! please write more!-
Pikfan chapter 4 . 7/28/2008
Poor Schnitzel going to therapy. And does Chowder and Gaspacho know where to go?
JP the Robot Hedgehog chapter 4 . 7/28/2008
Oh poor Schnitzel. Update soon please.
JP the Robot Hedgehog chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
Poor poor Schnitzel, having to put up with the others. Oh well, at least there's less then one. Upadte soon please.
Pikfan chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
That's pretty funny.
JP the Robot Hedgehog chapter 2 . 7/15/2008
LOL, I totally love your story! Poor Schnitzel, though, everyone's driving him crazy! Update soon please!
Humb1eBeginnings chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
LMAO! That was to funny. But they're going to drive poor Shnitzel crazy. I can picture his karaoke to. xD

To funny. Nice chapter.
Pikfan chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
Horray for chapter 2! It's a nice start to their adventure.

BTW, I loved the Hannah Montana part...poor Shnitzel.
Cylonite chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
"Wow, Gazpacho, we have the same backpack!"

Humb1eBeginnings chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Although it's kind of on the short side... I enjoyed it.

But it was more like a teaser, but I think I have a clue where you going. I'm guessing you trying to get it set up for everyone who going on the trip.

Ok... now my advice for the rest is to add a bit more details, make the chapters a little longer, espcially since this an adventure, but if you like short chapters at least add more than one at a time. Give us something to eat on, ya know? We won't a full bag of cookies, not the mini size bag.
Pikfan chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
This is a great story and all, but the only problem is that you have to get rid of the underline font thing. Otherwise, great story.
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