Reviews for Insidious Inquisitor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this one! Awesome job of taking a caricature of a character and making them relevant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() there should be more the other i can think of is the real us |
![]() ![]() Yes, she had to torture him and have him carve his name into his hand. Everything after this is bullshit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite an interesting take on things. I never thought I'd see a version of Umbridge I wouldn't hate. Congratulations on achieving what I previously thought impossible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Surprisingly short but even then satisfying story..liked the good umbridge as well as your writing style..it was perfect with good dialogues and not overly large descriptions.. definitely going to check out for a larger story of yours! |
![]() ![]() ![]() says im logged in when i try to sign in... but whatever. Anyways, great story, never read a goo Umbridge story before and it was very refreshing. I loved the perspective and the way everything wrapped up, great job and thanks for the good, creative, energy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve never read a good Umbridge story. I can’t believe this story worked but it did. Well plotted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved it. Great job |
![]() ![]() This story idea may have been more interesting if you hadn't made Harry the same spineless doormat of a simp like so many other authors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks, I found your story very refreshing! My first Good Umbridge! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is one ‘good’ Umbridge story I’ve seen before but wasnt as good as this one |
![]() ![]() It's a twist on canon!Umbridge - is it ever! 1. Twist the first - she does not use a blood (or Contract) quill -on Harry or anyone else. 2. Twist the second - she DOES use veritaserum on Harry - but the same way any law enforcement official would. 3. Twist the third - Susan knows her; in fact, Umbridge had been to Bones Manor - why? 4. Susan knows Croaker; in canon, Susan and Croaker had never met despite Croaker (as Croaker) being Neville's uncle. 5. Harry/Susan/Hannah - rare air; I had only seen this in the "Witches' Secret" cycle before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A MUST READ for those that like twists in the story plot! Canon till early fifth year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story from beginning to end. wasn't great with having Hermione be the bad guy. but it worked! |