I completely cracked up laughing at the end - or I would've if I wasn't reading this in a library! ;-D

Unexpected, unusual, interesting... this story caught attention and provided a lot of amusement.

Nice one. :D

OMG you managed to make me not hate Umbridge! Well done! Only thing...could you not have left the pink? People tend to act like her pink tendency is a crime equal to the Bllod Quill. It would have been nice to have her keep it whilst she's nice.

VERY nice! Kudos on a fine story.

pretty good

Yeah - clever idea / plot twist with Umbridge. The whole torture via the quill, though, remains implausible within that new context. Have to say that I found the Susan/Hannah thing a bit ridiculous as well. Not the pairing, but the two of them showing up uninvited and barging into meetings - and it being treated as acceptable. Its overkill and leaves them fairly unlikeable - at least in my eyes. They just seem a bit cocky - particularly Hannah. Overall, I just found that facet of the story grating and it detracted from a fairly decent story.

Surprisingly I liked the good Umbridge in this story.

its a good one shot.. i dont like the fact that Hermione was spying. even for rare books. but for this story it works.. keep up the great work looking forward to a susan hanna hermione harry pairing if your ever up to it

A really excellent twist, well thought out and written. A very good, enjoyable read.

Great story.

Liked it but no mention of sirius at the end?

good umbridge? i think this is the only fic that has it

Very nice and twisty _

The whole good Umbridge thing was awesome.