this was great.

First good Umbridge I can ever remember as well! I did enjoy this story. Thank you

Good Umbridge is definitely a different thing to see on here. I like it.

wow. this was certainly interesting. i like it.

I don't think I've ever read good!Umbridge before. It was very different. Not in a bad way, by my poor brain is still struggling with the concept. She just makes such a good villain. XD

Personally, I would've liked a multi-chapter better, especially if she used the Veritaserum in Harry's first detention. The whole "Sorry about the blood quill, but I didn't want to break my cover" doesn't really wash when you realize that she basically tortured a fifteen year old kid whose life experiences up to this point are pretty much one long string of traumatic events.

Also, just imagine the hilarity of Umbridge actually supporting the student rebellion from the shadows, while publicly playing the villain to give then something to rebel against. Meanwhile, she's using Harry's detentions as time for them to plot against all of the real bad guys, and help him with lesson plans for the DA that are actually what she wants be teaching, but can't.

A slower build-up would also allow more time to establish and explore things like the Harry/Hannah/Susan relationship that just kind of came out of left field, and Hermione turning out to be a really terrible friend. I'm all for either of those plot points, but its execution wasn't really believable here. Overall, though, this was fun to read and I'd like more.

needs a sequel but a good story

Harry is extremely out of character. Especially with that thought about adults knowing more than him so he would let them do what they do.
That’s not Harry.

I call bullshit on that. Dumbledore could not have come forward with evidence.
The ministry would just call it fake, or discredit it, or hide it altogether.
What evidence could he even provide that wouldn’t be easily discredited by the liars at the ministry?

One of my fav fics, wish i knew how to save it lol

I really enjoyed that. Very amusing story.

A good Umbridge. Who'd a thunk it? Well done.

Unexpected but entertaining!

Very original! I've never seen a Good!Umbridge story before. You handled it well. Adding to Favorites.

Good Dolores! What a surprise! Nice work together Amelia and Magician to get all the dirt on the Dursleys and Dumbledore. It was a fun read - thanks for great work!

Completely different and most enjoyable.