Reviews for Twisted Fate
Guest chapter 47 . 10/28/2014
Write more write more
WRITE ALREADY chapter 46 . 9/20/2013
beccahanks chapter 47 . 4/28/2013
omg i freaking LOVE this story :3 found it today and havent stop reading it :P and its now 2:45am XD but no update since 2010? :O pleeeeease continue this
amypondultimateginge chapter 47 . 8/22/2012
Please come back! I also agree with what others have said; Claire should get in trouble with mini-Sylar with it being all *shudder* incestuous like someone people insist on writing. I can't believe it's been 2 years since this was updated!
Schwester Aurelia chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Hi there!

I don't know how many times I read and reread this wonderful story (certain chapters more often, though...) - so I thought I'd let you know how great it is.

It's amazing that you and your friends wrote this as a roleplay - I had no idea such great stories could be written that way! :D

It's so lively and well written and funny, I simply love it!

Especially the relationship between Peter and Gabriel is really heartbreaking - they're not only awfully cute together but I think it's also quite believable for Peter to react in such a way if he were in this situation, he always wan't to help people.

And I really love how Gabriel comes to trust and respect and love him, it's so great to witness how he turns from anger and hate to respect and the state where he really cares for Peter and doesn't want to scare or dissapoint him. Peters faith in the good in him (and his firm hand, hehe :D) did him really good!

I also like the way Gabriel and Claire make up very much. They're so sweet together and it's such a good thing that he trusts her enough in the end to tell her of his mother and his fears, and it's also very great that she doesn't reject him for this. Awwww...

So, thank you very much you all for writing and sharing! Although it's sad the story stopped it's truly a great story and I will always reread it. :D

Btw, your story left a whole lot of little plot bunnies in my head... sooo... perhaps I shall write a little chapter or two set in this universe with all honor to you... I'll let you know of further progress if you'd like to read them...

Thank you very much and take care!

Lots of love,

Auri :D
MisquotedWarrior chapter 47 . 8/12/2011
*Blinks* ...
MetaGamer chapter 47 . 7/21/2011
This is a really good story, but seeing as you haven't updated in over a year I shouldn't expect more :(

*falls to knees and cries*

please let the evil writers block cloud of evil let you take another look at this story and just maybe finish it. Its really good
arctic monkeys chapter 47 . 9/7/2010
please tell me you didnt give up on this story. its been so long since youve updated, please update .
illogicalvulcan chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Great story so far!

Needs a bit of angst though...

Maybe Gabriel can have an "accident" of sorts?

Somebody in the Company wants revenge?

Lots of things could happen to him...

or Peter...

or even Claire?
synjax chapter 47 . 6/4/2010
"Oh, so she's only your daughter now?" ~touche'! XD

"Boring and predictable… yeah, I definitely don't see those words popping to mind when I think of your dad!" ~ fweh! XD

"A room full of stuffed teddy bears? Absolutely!" "Yea, I guess that was a no-brainer." ~ 8P

When's the next chapter gonna come up? 8o
highland girl 1592 chapter 47 . 6/3/2010
Poor is so hard for

him to convinc epeople that

he's not THAT Sylar anymore.:(

Especially when some people don't

want to be convinced.

I can understand Noah's concern

for Claire's saftey,but he knows

that there is a difference between

the adult Sylar with powers,and a

Sylar who is seven years old(he looks

like a child anyway),with NO powers

at all.:\ Too bad that you weren't

writing for the tv series Heros.

If you had been the show wouldn't

have been cancelled! Huggs! :D
synjax chapter 40 . 6/3/2010
'Then again, I guess he always DID act like a kid,' ~lol! Good point! XD

"Put me down! I know I'm irresistible and all, but control yourself woman!" ~ fwahhahahaha! XD

"Maybe. ...Yes! Where do you wanna go?" ~lol! Sudden change of mind, eh? XD

"We could walk, there are plenty of stores along the way that might draw your interest." "Stores? Yea, let's do that, I haven't gotten to see many of the stores in New York yet! C'mon." "Hey! Wait for me chick!" "C'mon! We've got stores to peek into!" "As long as you don't want to go shopping for shoes, I'm in. ...You know, the two-story Disney store is on the way, we could terrorize the help fiddling with all their toys." "I've never been in that Disney store! Two stories? ...Let's do that!" ~ "a bit" too over-excited & "a bit" too over-enthusiastic, eh? XD
synjax chapter 38 . 6/3/2010

Btw, one correction: it's "quid pro quo" not "quid per quo". Just thought you should know...:X
synjax chapter 34 . 6/3/2010
HWAUGH! More spanking? HWEHK!
synjax chapter 28 . 6/3/2010
"Thank gods this client is on the second floor; I somehow doubt this building has an elevator." "I could always carry you if you get too tired." "Aren't you just Mr. Funny man with all the jokes. Better be careful, I might take you up on that offer." ~hwehk! XD

"Smells like cat pee mixed with rotting trash up here." ~bleah! it must TOTALLY SUCK being in a room that smells like that! actually, i think it does! eeuck! xp

ohhh noooo...:dread: 8C
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