Reviews for Jasmine Scented Dreams
SasuHinaLoverx33 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
OMG ! You Should Update Soon!(:
I'm Super Curious , Now . LOL.
This Is Like One Of My Favorite SasuHina Fanfics cx
kandita chapter 7 . 4/21/2012
Please update soon
akira chapter 7 . 8/3/2011
aawww., i really hope you will continue this fic., preferably sometimes soon., this fic is so good., and i like your writing style., there are subtleties here and there, which i greatly enjoy and appreciate in a story, especially when the pairing is one like SasuHina, characters that are known being reserved & shy., one thing i really like about this fic is, even though it's an arranged marriage with no love foundation, you didn't turn it into a depressing story., i love how you describe SasuHina interactions and relationship., how each of them determined to fulfill their roles and duties as husband and wife, even when they realize it themself that they don't love each other., but still, you managed to write the story seems fun and cute., i also enjoy the little stories about what's going on with Neji's and Hanabi's life., although, to be honest i still don't know how their stories connect with SasuHina., which lead me, again, to hoping you will continue this story, soon.,

i enjoy this fic immensely., i'll be looking forward to your updates., and thank you for writing this story so far., Ganbatte! _
in your dreams as well chapter 7 . 2/25/2011
Awwww this is really cute please update :)
LLL.HINATA.LLL chapter 7 . 8/2/2010
this is a really good story

update
Pablo Hirunata chapter 7 . 7/22/2010
Awesome. I love this story. Update..update..update..please,..
nwyd chapter 7 . 5/30/2010
hinata is so so so so super cute! sasuke is nice. :) love your story, please update soon!
SatiricFable chapter 7 . 2/10/2010
This is, quite possibly, one of the best married Sasuhina stories I've ever read.

I usually don't like fics involving marriage, they seem more boring than other fics, but this was really entertaining! I also like how you took they're relationship slow, instead of having them proclaim love within the first two chapters.

Everyone was in character, which made me really happy, because for some writers, jealous/heartbroken Sakura somehow translates to pyscho bitch Sakura.

Overall, really well written, and just a great story. I hope you continue this!
ImCutePoison chapter 7 . 10/21/2009
I like it. I hope that you will continue this story sometime soon :]
math music reading chapter 7 . 7/20/2009
Oh dear, they had better hope that Sasuke returns early or that their child is born early. You said that they had to have an heir by their anniversary, not have one on the way. I love how sweet they are with eachother and I hope you update soon! You didn't have your own analysis of your fic as an A/N for this chapter so I hope you're already writing the next chapter. I can't wait to read the next installment!
math music reading chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
I actually liked your use of the Hinata tends a sick Sasuke scenario but I don't think it was very realistic. She's supposed to be a medic nin and even if that only invovles using chakra to heal wounds, she should have remembered the medicine. Oh well. Everything else was funny and I like that we got into Sasuke's mind a little bit more. Wow, it's been two months. The deadline's almost up.
math music reading chapter 5 . 7/20/2009
Ino's character is perfect! I love how you developed her character, she really is a motherly and practical person. Poor Neji, I like how he isn't overbearring but being a teacher is going to kill him. I'm only really guessing Shikamaru as another teacher with any certainty so I'm not going to venture any of my other candidates and wait to find out. The idea is totally awesome and original, I don't think I've seen anyone else using it! You have major creativity, I'm so jealous!
math music reading chapter 4 . 7/20/2009
I like how you're starting their relationship slowly, they're both formal and Sasuke really is a gentleman. The marketplace scene was funny, I hope they get to know eachother well enough that Hinata will realize how Sasuke is putting up with it but he doen't enjoy it. I'm actually reading ahead since my computer is slow at bringing up the review window so my reviews will probably be getting shorter. Regardless, I love every aspect of your writing and you deserve major congratulations on your skill.
math music reading chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
I think it was very like Hinata to want to prepare Sasuke's food and there minimal interaction fits both of their reserved natures. I can't believe how blunt Sasuke was although I love his consideration in going out for Chinese food with Hinata. She didn't even realize the significance since she didn't know he dislikes Chinese food. Poor Neji, what you did to him in this chapter was hilarious! I also like that you unobtrusively let it be known that Hanabi had a different protector, the little details mean so much! Please keep up your wonderful writing!
math music reading chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
You didn't make Sakura the antagonist, thank you! This is so much more realistic and in character, I really love your explanation and that you didn't use that overdone, cliche plot. I also liked Sakura's misconception of what happened between Hinata and Sasuke at the alter, it was very reasonable of her and so human! We all make so many mistakedn assumptions in life, different perspectives of events are so interesting. Kakashi's reactions to Neji's words were hilarious! So like him. I'm going to stop now so I can continue to the next chapter. I love your writing, the style is easy to read and such high quality!
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