Reviews for Private Moment
anonymous chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
this is good keep writing
anonymous chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
AWWWWWW that is so sweet!I have always thought they had kissed. YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITER!
PrettyBandgirl XD chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
i LOVED that. awesome story.
Bustedbyherparents chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
This was a little short, but otherwise, great! I am going to write my own version of this, er, 'incident' sometime. But I like yours! Good job.

FAlonso09 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Very nice, short and sweet! The only little problem is that they didn't know it was Sunny at the top of the slope when they were climbing but aside from that, very very nice. :)
cookie-pocky-strawberry-love chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
i liked it a lot
FanofSnicket chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
I liked it!
cloudlover16 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
That was cute!

I'm a Quigley/Violet shipper too and it was nice to read how the story would have been. Well done! :)
abandonedaccount123456790000 chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
that was so cute! i love violet and quiqly!

i just wrote my first fic too!

but yours is far beter than my will ever be!

they were tottally in character!

but the sad part is i want more!



Butterfree chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Yes, they were quite in character

I think the part when Quigely was realized he had fallen in love with her could've been stretched more to make it feel less rushed with her just being pretty and clever though.

~ CupidKirby(Twisterkirby)
QuigleyxViolet chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
That was so sweet!
Second daughter of Eve chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Oo, it's great! I always wish something like that had happened!

frizzyfro12 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
I thought it was perfect!

Great first fic.