|Reviews for To be an Arrancar|
| Veldrisk chapter 4 . 6/7/2012
I like this story. It would be nice however in you would get someone to proof-read it for you and correct the grammar errors.
| Veldrisk chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
Good story so far. But you need to stop using exclamation marks for almost all of the dialog.
| jboy44 chapter 4 . 7/18/2011
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
By any chance does Zabuza contain Kenpachi or does Gaara?
| missymoo11 chapter 4 . 9/15/2010
O.M.G I LOVE iT
| god of all chapter 4 . 11/8/2009
Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.
| Shadow65 chapter 4 . 5/2/2009
please update soon
| Zant's Minion chapter 4 . 3/18/2009
man i love this i mean it is normally naruto as a shinigami but this is fantastic naruto as a living arrancar is incredible please update soon XD
| Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi chapter 4 . 11/28/2008
| Kyuuki-sama chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
Yay! Naruto can summon Hollows! -Does the happy-dance- Your grammar is a little bad (but who am I to talk? My grammar sucks too), but keep it upp. You are getting better.
| XxDragonXxXSlayerxX chapter 4 . 11/5/2008
You need to seriously proof read your chapters...
There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes..
Chuunin not Chunine
Jounin not Jonnine
You would get more reviews...as most viewers will not read a fic that has a a lot of mistakes...
| Grave Wolf chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
A truly unique crossover.
| The Fifth Rider of Armageddon chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
I believe that Naruto's shiki is a dragon hybrid form.
As for the characters we all know Kakashi has Shunsui, and it's obvious that Hinata has Momo, Haku has Toshiro, Anko has Rukia, and I believe Zabuza has Kenpachi. Other than that I don't have the slightest clue where the others are.
| IReadOnly chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
You should try to proof-read your work...
If you don't have the time have someone beta it...
Some of your sentences are too long...
They don't even have a single comma on them...
I got somewhat dizzy trying to read or comprehend them...
Some are spelled as such you'd get a different meaning from what you want...
Just because they sound the same doesn't mean they're correct...
Like "looser", but you should've written "loser"...
You should also check your character's names...
Like "Tenchi", if you mean the ramen stand owner it's "Teuchi"...
Sorry if you feel that I flamed you...
I'm just trying to help you improve...
Your idea is somewhat interesting...
I'd like to see where this goes...
| Passionate-Eyes chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
I like how you made a change from the original style of Bleach crossover