|Reviews for Irrevocable Heart: Siamese Amnesia 2|
| ShiftingWinds125 chapter 13 . 4/20/2009
Oh Crap! Holmes is going to kill Greene! He didn't listen to Holmes and when Holmes finds out he is going to be mad! *Dives for cover under the couch, making sure not to awake Lestrade*
| The Fool's Hope chapter 13 . 8/27/2008
Hm... :) Methinks...
Eh... I'll wait and see :)
| FoggyKnight chapter 13 . 8/27/2008
I liked the switch you did from Tommy to Sergeant Greene to indicate who was moving into the hut.
Keep it up!
| KCS chapter 13 . 8/27/2008
*blinks* Twenty years old...freckles...able to break a man's ribs with one punch...heck yes, send him over! :D
Jk. Seriously, if you kill him I shall cry.
And, to be completely cliched and unoriginal (sorry, long day and evening - I teach a primary children's choir at church and we had thirty 1st thru 3rd graders, UGH), the plot thickens. Hmm...
| aragonite chapter 13 . 8/27/2008
Oh this is so good. I love every chapter that pops up, get worried and frightened...and then feel crushed when the chapter ends until next time!
| pebbles66 chapter 12 . 8/27/2008
Oh, dear - you're not going to kill off Tommy, are you?
*Barton does not seem like a nice man*
| The Fool's Hope chapter 12 . 8/26/2008
Eek! Watch out, Tommy! *begins biting nails again*
I think you have the writing down perfectly :) And I loved your sketch of him! (the freckles... aww...:)
Have to keep packing so don't have time for coherent review (am ACTUALLY leaving, this time, lol) but YAY CHAPTER! Awesome job, as always :D
| aragonite chapter 12 . 8/26/2008
If you hurt Tommy or kill him, I swear I won't be able to finish this. GHAH! (pleads)
| FoggyKnight chapter 12 . 8/26/2008
A tail? I hope its Holmes, and not the acquaintance of the chap that hit Lestrade. Lol, after I read the chapter, I almost wrote this in dialect :D.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| KCS chapter 12 . 8/26/2008
Aw, dang...why do the cool characters always get followed? :( *sniff*
Adorable lad, btw, from your sketch...send him over when he's off duty next, won't you? Assuming you don't end up killing him, in which case please DON'T send him...
| Wirral Bagpuss chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Am enjoying this story very much. Poor Watson, he has had a bad time of it! Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you update soon !
| pebbles66 chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Poor old Watson! But it's nice to see Holmes concerned about him!
| KCS chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Hmph, Watson needs to not think about anything except getting better - from the foreshadowing choking this chapter, he's gonna need it soon...
Please don't kill Greene! :( *hopes and crosses fingers*
Going now to check out the sketches - hope you continue to feel better quickly! *glomps*
| I Don't Go Here Anymore chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Oh, yay for updates! D
I love these little scenes between Holmes and Watson that you write. They're a lot of fun to read and really show the relationship between them.
I do feel sorry for Holmes, though, with so many injured people at his house, LOL!
| aragonite chapter 11 . 8/25/2008
Oh, you updated! How sweet of you! Poor Watson. Talk about someone who was more observant than he let on..! And what a home for the injured this is turning out to be!
Don't let anything happen to Tommy Greene!