|Reviews for Fight the Good Fight, Finish the Race|
| Seraphinit chapter 13 . 10/13
That sad moment when you find a good but old fanfic... And it just ends
| Kuroi Rin chapter 13 . 10/8
It's been years since the last Update but I do hope that somehow someday the Story would go one because it's awesome!
| Rin1730 chapter 13 . 6/24
Really enjoy this fic... I would Love to read more of it too... Sigh
| Lia chapter 13 . 5/16
Update! Please please please please please, it was getting so interesting and I lost track of how many times I have reread this just looking forward to he next chapter. PLEASE!
| Nickirem.Tetsuya.Zoldyck chapter 4 . 4/16
This is pretty good, but Kanda seems to be OOC to me. For one, he doesn't strike me as the type of person who would believe in God, praying, saying God bless, ect. The manga despicts Kanda as a character who had long since lost hope that some being would rescue or help him, much like the other characters in the Order. So, the religious part of Kanda in this story is strange and OOC to me. Also, he is extremely affectionate towards Allen, as in, he shows the affection like a normal person... I see Kanda as a person who would be harsher in treating people, and would not apologise in such an obvious fashion as he did after the slapping. Honestly, he was more likely to maul Allen with Mugen than slap him.
Also, there is something that is really standing out from the writing, and that is the language used by Allen and Kanda. Kanda is Japanese, and uses Japanese terms. He calls Allen brat, and I would had taken this just as the writer not wanting to include unnecessary foreign language in their writing. Yet, Allen, who is not from a Japanese background, somehow ends up calling Kanda sensei. It is very strange, and I would think that it is the start of a plot hole.
That is all I can point out for now, I sincerely hope that you are not offended by the critism. I am enjoying this fic very much, and I want to help you improve it.
| XavierForest chapter 13 . 1/17
| CloudCarnivore chapter 13 . 12/24/2014
Pleases continue soon! :D
| ScarletIsCool chapter 13 . 9/12/2014
You are still going to continue this...right? This is really good and your writing is also the same. Please don't abandon fics like this.
| LDK chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Oh. My. God. This is one of the BEST -man stories I have read. Hands down the best Yullen fic. And the crossover is fucking perfect. Usually I don't swear in reviews, but holy mother of shit man. You ditched this story in the worst spot :,(. I am DIEING! I need to know more! Allen acing like the orphan was so freakin perfect, and then Umbrige finding out about him... How is that going to tie in? Kanda with the order of the phoenix? Allen going to the chamber of secrets? This story is so fucking amazing that I FEEL THE NEED TO SPEAK IN CAPS! CAPS! FOr gods sake. I was not going to comment due to this being abandoned, but if you ever read this, dear author, please, please, please finish this story! Put it up for adoption! Something! Anything! Voldemort and Rhode's interactions are so perfect, the plot to this story is so perfect, and Allen and Kanda's developing relationship is perfect. Oh my god I am fangirling so hard over you. Thank you SO much for writing this. I absolutely love this story. I can't criticize it except the answer to the math question is negative two and Allen's arm should be black with the tattoo-like shoulder, and not red. Thanks again for writing this, but I beg of you! Put it up for adoption! Or something! This has gotta be finished, its a beautiful piece of writing and a brilliant story.
| MssCassandra chapter 13 . 12/29/2013
Ya tricking harry!
| If you knew chapter 13 . 11/4/2013
Eumm... wow. I adore this story. Really. But it hasn't been updated for so long...
Will you update it sometime or is it dead? If it isn't dead could you update soon? Or put up a notice saying *Not Dead* or something?
Please? *Pout Puppy Eyes*
/If you knew (you'd wish you didn't)
| kapurisudesu chapter 13 . 8/12/2013
I FUCKING LOVE THIS!
Plz update soon, and Dont abandon it... people like me wanna read more... even if you have forgotten about it? Just don't abandon it ;)
Wuv you! K-chan xxx :3
| kiki chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
Why is Kanda such a violent teacher?
| kiki chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Lucky you that people think your younger I'm 12 and people who don't know me think I'm 15.
| mikuruayamizawa chapter 13 . 4/29/2013
Can someone please just adopt this? The author hasn't been active since 2009.