Reviews for Control
JustAnotherScribbler chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I love this, it shows James differently, but also it's familiar, the way e hurts her despite what he just felt. :P
DarknekoKurai chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Oh wow
Winged and Dangerous chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I loved this! My favorite part was the last line, "If he were Edward, he would fight for her." Loved it! Great job! : )


Kittykat! : )
Erulastiel-Ithilwen chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
update soon
The-Essence-Of-Everything chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
That was amazing really emotional keep writing :)
Who-Wouldn't-Waver-With-You chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Oog. I can no longer speak. That is HOT, man! :) I love!

Selinde1 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Short and sweet. I like it!
Reptar Bars chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
I like how James ended up hurting her despite his feelings.


That made me happy, for whatever reason.
Miss FHorn chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
more please!
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I hope you're going to continue. It's a good start
Queen-of-happy-endings chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
u should update instead of keeping it a one-shot

it would turn into an awesome story

like jasper and emmett don't completely kill james and he comes back and kidnaps her out of his love for her

just some suggestions in case u do wanna update lol
9thgradefiction chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Surprisingly, I like this. :D
TeamVampire chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Wow. Very nice.
Twilightangel98 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
That's really great. Write more. Hehe, this is from the sneak-peak clip, isn't it?
TwilightFanatic01 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Wow, this is pretty good! Great use of words! Only, who's POV is it. Its Jacobs right? or not. Idk, but please PM me and let me know! Peace love and chicken grease