Reviews for Midnight Desire
Jesstew chapter 6 . 8/12
He waste too much time fantasizing and is staring to get annoying. I don't want to read something that is not happening half chapter. The story is interesting, though.
crystalshanta96 chapter 26 . 7/17
Oh my gawd! I LOVED IT! Amazing! I did not want to see it end!
Leila Hale chapter 26 . 5/13
Your version is more fun than the official x)
Atwiggs chapter 11 . 3/11
Lol! This is so funny! Poor Edward, what teenage boys have to put up with!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 26 . 1/14
Loved this story so much...thank you!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 25 . 1/14
Thank God he found her in time!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 24 . 1/14
Ohhhh shit
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 23 . 1/9
Since this is empty...I'm just gonna say I agree with previous viewers...why so many damn questions...just enjoy this! haha
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 22 . 1/9
Shower love...yassssss
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 21 . 1/9
First time...realistic and not very satisfying but round 2...yes please! Finally! And it was perfect *sigh*
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 20 . 1/9
Check. Mate. Edward! I love this Bella so much haha. Edward, for being 17, is so fucking smooth...setting all this up to make this night magical for them.

The monster literally ROTFLHAO...classic!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 19 . 1/9
Edward, you are totally and completely worth it! Hopefully prom it is...
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 18 . 1/9
Dr., Captain Fucking Sex God...YES PLEASE! Lucky Bella!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 17 . 1/9
UNF that scene at the top of the chapter...soooo good!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 16 . 1/8
"Our girlfriend swallows...our girlfriend swallows" hahahahaha best line!
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