Reviews for Midnight Desire
Drithligh chapter 7 . 5/6
I don't know why I find that a teenage boy's attempt to seduce a girl might include pickled frogs to be so funny; but I do. I really do.
KDMCAM chapter 20 . 3/13
I knew it!
KDMCAM chapter 2 . 3/13
I did not even grasp he was dreaming. I thought wow this is happening really fast but i'm not complaing!
JojoJinx chapter 24 . 10/20/2019
The monster is hilarious
FutureClient chapter 11 . 5/28/2019
If I had a penny for every time you've written "the monster" i'd be as rich as Bill Gates
Frankie09 chapter 26 . 5/24/2019
Smutty fun
Gagika chapter 26 . 11/20/2018
Great smut ;-)
tailysnaily chapter 26 . 11/13/2018
this was amazing LMAOO the monster was hysterical, youre the original Big Mouth
Jesstew chapter 6 . 8/12/2018
He waste too much time fantasizing and is staring to get annoying. I don't want to read something that is not happening half chapter. The story is interesting, though.
crystalshanta96 chapter 26 . 7/17/2018
Oh my gawd! I LOVED IT! Amazing! I did not want to see it end!
Leila Hale chapter 26 . 5/13/2018
Your version is more fun than the official x)
Atwiggs chapter 11 . 3/11/2018
Lol! This is so funny! Poor Edward, what teenage boys have to put up with!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 26 . 1/14/2018
Loved this story so much...thank you!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 25 . 1/14/2018
Thank God he found her in time!
SoCalTwiNurse chapter 24 . 1/14/2018
Ohhhh shit
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