Reviews for Midnight Desire
Lavender dresses chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
thunnababy chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
This looks interesting. He's gob smacked, hit over the head, in love or lust with a girl he hasn't even said two words to yet. Lol
bella0609 chapter 14 . 9/15/2014
Hmm...Bella doesn't want to go slow, does she?
I am loving this story. "The monster" has quite a sense of humor and the two of them together have me laughing all night long!
bella0609 chapter 13 . 9/15/2014
Oh no... James!? That doesn't sound good, especially when I see you writing "not for the better".
bella0609 chapter 12 . 9/15/2014
They are so good for each other. Whenever Edward is totally honest with Bella, she surprises him and is very practical. I really love these two! But, that monster really has it in for Edward :)
bella0609 chapter 11 . 9/15/2014
I like the way the two of them are honest with each other and there are no games being played.
I feel really bad how much pain Edward and his monster is in...
bella0609 chapter 10 . 9/15/2014
So glad they had such a great time. Edward was very sweet and a complete gentleman :)
bella0609 chapter 9 . 9/15/2014
Oh how funny... to actually be wearing the fantasy that Edward is trying to put out of his head! LOL
bella0609 chapter 8 . 9/15/2014
Poor Edward... He's really having a tough time.
bella0609 chapter 7 . 9/15/2014
I love Edward's little monster friend, Eddie :) He's so verbal :) LOL
bella0609 chapter 6 . 9/14/2014
Our reviews crack you up - your story cracks me up!
bella0609 chapter 5 . 9/14/2014
This is so good. You can always trust Alice, huh :)
bella0609 chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
Loving the story - he's just crazy
bella0609 chapter 3 . 9/14/2014
This is just too funny - Edward is so arrogant.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/21/2014
I have only one problem with this story. Bella should tell police about James and what he tried to do to her. Just to save other women in the future.
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