Reviews for Midnight Desire
Amna chapter 13 . 2/14/2014
oh... james? yikes...
Amna chapter 7 . 2/14/2014
cool...nice work...
Amna chapter 5 . 2/14/2014
amazing... good work... its real descriptive...
gottahavemyEdwar chapter 8 . 1/30/2014
and her tits! dont forget about her tits! LOL. Your monster is so naughty, but I LOVE your little monster! hahahaha!
LivingVampire chapter 26 . 1/19/2014
Awesome fluffy story!
twirob chapter 26 . 1/18/2014
i thoroughly enjoyed this awesomely funny *monster* story btw are you any closer to completing the continuation of this story? ;D
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 26 . 1/8/2014
so there is a second part to this story please answer me I need more if there is more to this story my e-mail is THANK YOU I LOVED THIS STORY
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 25 . 1/8/2014
I am so glad Edward got there in time and beat hell out of James and that he really didn't do anything to her and I am glad they are ok with everything now she better get that work faxed to her teacher so she wont fail
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 24 . 1/8/2014
I am asking the same question Edward asked why did she go with him lets hope he don't hurt her and Edward gets there in time
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 22 . 1/8/2014
you and your little monster keep me laughing I love your story and I love them together and I am so glad they had the greatest prom night ever
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 21 . 1/8/2014
I for one am so glad they finally made love and that is what they did make love because they are in love this was not prom night sex . they want forever and I hope they get it don't you
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 20 . 1/8/2014
ok so now what is he going to come up with he either makes love to her or looses her because she will think he really don't want her
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 19 . 1/8/2014
why is he so stupid not to see she loves him as much as he loves her
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 18 . 1/8/2014
ok they are so in love they really do need to really be together let it be prom night please
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 17 . 1/8/2014
I still say it's time for them to have the real thing don't you and why do you have James bothering them he's a creep
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