Reviews for Midnight Desire
lia516 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Great way of reworking the original TWILIGHT scenes. I wondered how you were going to do the car accident. That was really good.

I'm glad you're going to stay in Edward's POV. Sometimes people switch too much and it just gets confusing.
bethann2103 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
great chapter, I love this story! Love the little eddie reference and how you are working so closely to twilight.
three.hills chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Great chapter, love it!
KRC81 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
septentrion chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
I think I like this parody to much.
jesslikescoffee chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
I love how you're twisting everything so it works that they're human. Great job. :)
Mdots chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
*Celebration Dance* ... GOD! Edward's secret... rofl rofl... :D

This is going to be great. And I am not in favour of a BPOV.. That isn't needed much here. The story is going at a really steady pace and its really nice.. no need to get different POV's here :D

Keep going :D I am out of words to praise you :D :D
Capricorn75 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Awesome, as always. I love how you are able to turn the bloodlust into just plain lust.
Mdots chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
I just got my internet back! YAY!

*rolling on the floor laughing*

"Caveman" was a perfect description of current Edward. OMG! Bella Swan Resistance Plan! *Rofl* This chapter was really hilarious. You did a great job. I really wasn't thinking that hunting will be replaced by "practice" *rofl* You did fabulous in mixing humor in this.. Oh God...This is totally funny :D :D

Please update soon. You are doing great :D
Sophia Supernova chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
Hi Twilightzoner,

Excellent fic! I don't normally read smut/lust stories, but I'm getting tired of seeing countless mushy romance fics on this site. Your story goes really in depth in Edward's mind, clearly demonstrating the conflict between his "healthy" mind, and the "darker" part that everyone has at one point or another. I really felt sorry for him when he talked to his dad about it; it must have been so embarrassing! Yet, I hope Carlisle's advice will help him. "I suddenly wondered if this was a wise idea. What exactly was I supposed to say: I saw a girl and got a hard on today?" This line, among others, made me laugh.

Keep it up! And keep Edward's sexy wisecracks coming! ;)

S. Supernova
jesslikescoffee chapter 3 . 7/19/2008
Lol, this story makes me laugh.
TwilightSarah1414 chapter 3 . 7/19/2008
omg, really good chapter! update soon!
xesty chapter 3 . 7/18/2008
fantastic fic. i love it.
Oo Livia Cullen oO chapter 3 . 7/18/2008
This is amazing ! I really liked how you made Edward more teenage-like ! It's a refreshing change ! I loved it ! Can't wait for more !
sweetsimplcity chapter 3 . 7/18/2008
i love the way your story is going update soon ]
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