Reviews for Midnight Desire
bella0609 chapter 11 . 9/15/2014
I like the way the two of them are honest with each other and there are no games being played.
I feel really bad how much pain Edward and his monster is in...
bella0609 chapter 10 . 9/15/2014
So glad they had such a great time. Edward was very sweet and a complete gentleman :)
bella0609 chapter 9 . 9/15/2014
Oh how funny... to actually be wearing the fantasy that Edward is trying to put out of his head! LOL
bella0609 chapter 8 . 9/15/2014
Poor Edward... He's really having a tough time.
bella0609 chapter 7 . 9/15/2014
I love Edward's little monster friend, Eddie :) He's so verbal :) LOL
bella0609 chapter 6 . 9/14/2014
Our reviews crack you up - your story cracks me up!
bella0609 chapter 5 . 9/14/2014
This is so good. You can always trust Alice, huh :)
bella0609 chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
Loving the story - he's just crazy
bella0609 chapter 3 . 9/14/2014
This is just too funny - Edward is so arrogant.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/21/2014
I have only one problem with this story. Bella should tell police about James and what he tried to do to her. Just to save other women in the future.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 4 . 6/19/2014
This cracks me up.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
Lol!
Guest chapter 26 . 5/31/2014
Wow hahaha loved this Edward :)
aniseed flower chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Argh! So many chapters I have already reviewed. I have to try and find ones that I missed the first time round... Thank you for writing this... So long ago. But also a HUGE thank you for KEEPING it here. A lot of authors take their stuff away. Im so glad yours is still here. :o)
aniseed flower chapter 6 . 5/1/2014
Ohhh! I forgot all the scenarios that Edward envisioned himself dead with his dick in his hand! So funny!
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