Reviews for Midnight Desire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Q's..."tired, didn't sleep much", his face "colored", and "pushed tray away cuz he wasn't hungry"...they are still like OG vamps right...not sleeping, eating, or can blush...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahahahaha I KNEW it was gonna be a dream! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concept but good first chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know.. The way the monster was described in this chapter reminded me so much of this netflix show called Big Mouth .. I think u should really watch it .. Its hilarious lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it |
![]() ![]() I imagine your monster like the hormone monster from Big Mouth. |
![]() ![]() You crack me up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was grinning so much it hurt at the end of this chapter, he's was just too adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was grinning so much it hurt at the end of this chapter, he's was just too adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was grinning so much it hurt by the end of this chapter, he was just too cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was really funny and very close to Edward worrying about Bella. I could see the correlation between the 2 books. So glad that there is more. Mickey |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey TwilightZoner, I know it's been at least five years that you haven't posted anything so maybe you're not even looking at reviews anymore... Anyway, I wanted to tell you that I loved your story, it made me laugh so hard. Your Edward is so cute and so stupid and so adorable... It's really funny to see the story this way with an Edward that's not as much in control of himself as the original one (which is now bland and lame compared to this one! ). It's too bad you didn't keep writing, I really enjoyed your story a lot ! I wish you the best ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is hilarious! Spot on! Enjoyed it IMMENSELY! |
![]() ![]() I like your writing you should do a scene where Esme or Carlisle walks in on them and they have to explain |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy hell! That was fantastic! Loved your Edward! Loved the monster! I lmfao through most of this story & when I wasn't laughing I was trying to keep my cool through the super steamy lemons! I only wish that it continued on through college, marriage & the ultimate cockblock of babies! I love to see the monster survive raising babies! Great job! Thank you for sharing this! xx |