|Reviews for Unbreakable|
| BeautifulDesertFoxglove chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
| Fat Cat chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
And bam, another killer last line. Such a tragic ending for Draco that his final hope of death cannot be fulfilled.
"a despising smirk was playing around his Father's lips", an adjective other than despising would be more appropriate as it makes the sentence rather awkward.
"the dead man, who could have been father to a boy, but had decided for a disgrace of the family instead", I understand what is being conveyed, at least I believe, so but it seems confused. Maybe rewrite it into two sentences.
| virus-of-blossoms chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I love the story so far, how you've set it! I can't wait to see how you make iit progress from here onwards. :D
| Ali-chan et Vani-chan chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
wow!Your fic is very well written and angsty. I loved it;p