|Reviews for The Runner|
| Fishy Rainboots chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Very interesting. I'm glad you've written more about Harper. Great job.
| RhiannonNymph chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Is it the actual end of the story? You could probably go somewhere with this.
Just go back and read through it once or twice: there were a few places where it seemed like you had words missing, or you're word choice/tense was off.
Other than that, it was a nice start (and end if you so choose). The only thing that I didn't get was how she knew about Atlantis. Maybe she found out in one of your other stories? I'll have to check.
Keep up the good work.