|Reviews for A Cleansing Touch|
| Rokkis chapter 12 . 1/27/2009
Yeah! Hopefully Harry will start piecing himself together!
| Midday Moonlight chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
exciting can't wait for more update soon
| kittyfiction2008 chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
OMG OMG OMG harry hugged me! *smiles and hugs little harry back* So cute! Lets see if I can name all the harry's so far...
1. James the 'grown up' harry
2. Sable the 'book worm' harry
3. Ghost the disconnected harry
4. Little Harry
5. Matthies the 'sexual and untrusting' harry
6. The one we met for just a flash last chapter when tom when to kiss harry... or what ever he did... maybe the broken harry the one that dose not like the be touched I don't know. And you see him again just for a moment at the end on the chapter... I truly believe this is part of the harry that we met in the first chapter. But I'm not 100 percent sure that this is the real harry... maybe a part of him like the other have been...
7. The angry over protective of his friends harry (The one we met in this chapter who hurt the table)
8. the harry that dosen't like to be touched in any way shape or form
Thats all I got right now... I'm going to go through the first two chapter and name them with each part...
The Dursley’s home, once so filled with the delicious screams of his dying relatives, was silent. It was a change that Harry found he enjoyed very much.- Matthias or James not to sure
“Tom! How nice of you to visit. I’m actually glad you’re here. Making a lot of noise my relatives were. It’s nice and quiet now that you’re here. I like it. You should kill people more often!” - harry number 6
Harry had to take him by the sleeve and guide the potion’s master inside, sitting him down himself.- little harry
The mirrors in his room were all shattered but Harry had taken to gluing the shards to the wall in a parody of their once whole forms. The images they reflected were distorted and just as disturbing as the child who had made them.-like Harry number6. or Matthias
“I’m fine! Peachy keen, actually. Ask Hedwig. She’ll tell you. Everything is just fine.” He answered, his voice maybe a little too high pitched for some reason- Matthias
while he gestured at the dead bird. “Everything will be just fine…” Was his whispered reply.- Harry number 6
“Don’t touch me! Don’t you ever touch me!” He screamed with rage bubbling from within him like a massive dragon come to devour him.- harry number 8.
Harry snorted at the comment and his snort became outright hysterical laughter. He was panting for breath, clutching at his aching chest. He had never heard such lies in his life! Or funnier still, perhaps Tom actually believed them? His laughter pushed him against the glass covered wall, slicing his skin and shirt with every touch.“No one will touch me! Unless I want it? Please don’t tell me you actually believe that drivel? Now everyone says I wanted it!” He managed to get out in between laughter. - Matthies
Like a light switch, his grin was gone to be replaced by the most despairing expression Tom had ever seen on a person. Harry touched the glass against in an almost loving caress, “ I never…I didn’t want…Touch…Never touch…”- harry number 8.
“The freak deserves it though. I’m a freak, I deserve what they gave me. I deserved what they did…” He whispered once more, his gaze seemingly far off and distant.- Maybe Ghost I don't know...
“Harry?” Tom asked, pausing to wait for the teen to acknowledge his presence. Harry’s eyes flicked to his own before flicking off to stare at the floor, “ Would you like to come with Severus and I? We promise to not let a single person touch you again. We aren’t here to hurt you.”
Harry continued to stare at the floor, not giving an answer. His soft lips trembled as Snape stepped closer to him. He shrank against the glass further as if it were a safety blanket. - Ghost
“And what shall we pray for those who have lost, Not sight of the goal, But sight of the cost? Many a finish, Many an end, For enemy for lover, For betrayer, for friend.” - Sable
The small rhyme was the only thing that he would say more. Without looking up at them, Harry curled up on his bloodstained bed and just shook his head to everything else that was said to followed Tom and Severus out of his bedroom, his dead owl’s cage in his arms. He wouldn’t leave her. She had never left his side and he would do the same. -Ghost
“Hello Uncle. You don’t look like your feeling well. Perhaps I should get Aunt Petunia to get you something? No? I’m going away it seems, so I won’t be in the way for a while. Give Aunt Marge a big sloppy kiss for me, okay?” He said cheerfully to his uncle’s corpse.- Matthias
Harry merely smirked in such a way that the hairs on the Dark Lord’s neck stood at attention. The teen said no more, but shook his head in place of a reply.- No question about it that was so James
Ok sense I'm way to lazy to go through the next few chapter I wont do so but I think you get my point right? These other personalty's have been showing up sense the begining but I just don't think you even realized it sin... . its all good though we have our moments... I have a feeling that I may have combined some of the personalities in number 6. and 8. I do believe that those two mainly 6. may have more then one personalty trite in there... you now what I mean? Maybe not... but yeah... Wonderful wonderful story FYI I think I'm going to enjoy reading this story for much longer! I love specultateing on this story with you... and to tell you the truth this is the longest review that i have written so la... Um.. have fun and thank yous!
| LBQIO chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
i love ur story i love it love u
| itachisgurl93 chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
...so..now there's harry, matthias, james, ghost, n now sable...right? wow! can u say mutlipl persons! lol! thx 4 the update!
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
this is good. hey he's back. ha ha. and poor draco's gonna have a heart attack by the end. ha ha.
| Fk306 chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
this is great I look forward to more
| YellowJacket69 chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
WOW! Harry did a flip on Draco it was like sweet Harry and then exorcist when the girl's head spun around on her shoulders then it's THE Harry and then he's sweet again.
Well any way I was going to say smething else but anyway good job so far.
| JWOHPfan chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
lol Kinda nice to see Draco off balance for once. Nice chapter!
| benihime.chan chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
pleze update soon
| interrobang345 chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
yay real harry! I love that you had these two chapters up so quickly thanks! So now theres a violent Harry too? Whats his name gonna be?
| ams71080 chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
Aw! Sable sounds really smart. And Draco chuckling...no hard feelings, huh?
| Pirate Bo chapter 12 . 1/26/2009
Bo: Woot! NEW PERSONALITY ONCE AGAIN! TWO IN ONE CHAPTER YAHOO!
Ski: Hahahahaha. Poor table! XD Great chapter!
| interrobang345 chapter 11 . 1/26/2009
So is that journal "Just" like the old one? With the horcrux and the ablity to answer harry and everything? Great chapter though i love Ghost! I can just see Harry acting like that little girl from poultergest...staring at the tv that isn't even on. Great Chapter!
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 11 . 1/26/2009
cute. and fitting name for the other one.