Reviews for If At First
maymay85985 chapter 5 . 12/1/2014
interesting! i wanna see what will happen next! update soon please!
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Wait, so he died, went back to Sereitei, died again and woke up back at his old skeleton. Damn!

Naruto, fuck you reality.
disappointed chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
i didn't notice this was the last chapter. i give a 2 out of 5 for this story.
Disappointed chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
tenni-chan is ugly, otherwise the story is going okay.
Disappointed chapter 3 . 5/21/2010
tenni-chan is lamo. :(
HikariNoTenshi-San chapter 5 . 10/22/2009
OMg Tenni-chan is right I LOVE her! XD It was SO funny when she said "The level of asskickery that Tenni-chan is about lay on you is...MONUMENTAL!" XD FAVORITE part of the story so far. OH and Iruka BROKE Kenpachi's arm!...SWEET! UPDATE!
DraGooNia chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
update soon
Kurushimi-31415 chapter 5 . 7/7/2009
This reader hates Tenni-chan (I want to see what happens, I don't hate her)! *assumes fetal position and hides in a corner*
OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 1/27/2009
love tenni it up
JadeStoneTheYounger chapter 5 . 1/12/2009
I continue to really like your story so far. Please update again really soon.
davethedark chapter 5 . 1/4/2009
update son
NoMercyOfDeath chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
col its like a party in my brain when i try and think of wtf is up with Tenni but ur right with the Omake shesh cute...in an innocent killer kind of way
adamthm chapter 3 . 12/8/2008
hi
Demonshadows chapter 3 . 11/11/2008
this seems pretty cool please update soon.
JadeStoneTheYounger chapter 3 . 10/21/2008
I really like your story so far. Please update again really soon.
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