|Reviews for All's Fair|
| Jeneva Mehr chapter 20 . 3/1
This is a fabulous story. Your writing style is superb and I wish more people had your talent or at least the sense to get a good beta. Your portrayals were heart wrenching and thrilling without being unbelievable. My only wish was for a little more *ahem* action but that's just my own taste. This was a fabulous read so thank you for it.
P.s. you may wish to change status to 'complete'
| Gal Can't Help It chapter 20 . 1/25
This story is really not what I expected after reading the first 5 chapters - it's funny and fluffy in the beginning, then takes a sharp turn in direction that I didn't see coming. I'm still trying to figure out whether or not I liked where it decided to go, given the decisions made by the characters - especially Sakura. At least she acknowledged she was greedy.
I think you write dialogue very well, and the Mizukage plot came out of nowhere, but what an interesting concept that added a whole lotta something to this story. I like your style of writing - even if I'm not agreeing with what the characters are doing, I still feel compelled to continue reading to see if they can resolve their problems or make them hilariously more complicated.
| eri.hikaruaddict chapter 15 . 12/10/2013
gaaah, who will she choose? i still want this fic become sakura x team 7.. dont let her choose T.T
btw, peverted kakashi is just so hot here..
| eri.hikaruaddict chapter 8 . 12/9/2013
god! if i am sakura, i will not choose one of them because i will claim all of them. can i? *evil laugh
its hard to pick, they have their own charm..ck ck ck, i pity u on this sakura..u have to choose one!
but imagine marry all 4 guys in team 7 is make me droll *hahaha, i guess it that really happen, i will truly understand what people say about like living in heaven
| Kiko12350 chapter 20 . 10/13/2013
| Kiko12350 chapter 7 . 10/12/2013
Wat happened to sasuke!?
| Kiko12350 chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
Wow... Dating all 4 people
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/4/2013
omfg greatest. story. ever. AHH
| kidloco chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
i love you man/girl, i really need read you profile lol, you just did what i really want a sequel of heat and maybe i had read it in the past, i cant remember but, man is fun to read it :D
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/18/2013
I really liked the plot of the story but it could have been sooooo much better if Sasuke had won her heart over. It seems only rational for Sakura to be with Sasuke after all!
| hannah.calder.75 chapter 17 . 3/1/2013
Gaara: Is she free now? Sakura: Didn't you read it properly? Sasuke: Hn Naruto: Ramen. *.* Sai: Rocks Kakashi: I lied to sakura.
| hannah.calder.75 chapter 16 . 3/1/2013
Sasuke: I like the what if part but sakura asking to marry all of us?! NEVA! Naruto: Finally me and sasuke agree about the main storyline. Sai: ... Kakashi: So did I win? Gaara: So I only have to kill kakashi now? Wait that would hurt the alliance between the villages and hurt sakura! Sakura: Ya think? Me: O-o When did they Gaara get emotional? Naruto is a anime that i'll never understand.
| hannah.calder.75 chapter 15 . 3/1/2013
Kakashi: *epic face* Naruto: U-umm guys.. Sasuke: KAKASHI WATCH OUT! Sai: Holy mudda fuqa! Gaara: *fully transformed even though he still doesn't have shukaku* Im going to kill you all.
| hannah.calder.75 chapter 14 . 3/1/2013
*beckons naruto overf* Naruto: *Uncontrollable laughter* Sai: I liked the last page better. Sasuke: I so need emo music. Kakashi: Naruto, its never going to happen. Gaara: *Transforming even though he doesn't even hav shukaku anymore*
| hannah.calder.75 chapter 13 . 3/1/2013
*see's the what if bit* *beckons sai over* Sai: *blushing* Naruto: Why is there a what if? Sasuke: *Breaks a chair* Kakashi: Not going to happen sai. Gaara: Im going to kill them all. Kiba: WHEN DID I GET INTO THIS?! Shikamaru:Whoa. Troublesome. Ino: HOLY S**T