Reviews for A Clandestine Reality
ChimChim'sJacket chapter 15 . 1/12
i feel so bad for ron :((
DiagonAli chapter 1 . 10/25/2021
really, really cute story!
Serennos chapter 20 . 10/12/2021
A satisfying ending. Thanks
Serennos chapter 15 . 10/12/2021
Poor Ron, but he did start the ball rolling when swapping Hermione’s potions and insisting on seeing the Healer...
Serennos chapter 12 . 10/12/2021
Well, that chapter was action-packed!
Serennos chapter 1 . 10/12/2021
Great start and well-written…
chibi-Clar chapter 20 . 9/29/2021
Super cute! Lovely epilogue ️️
chibi-Clar chapter 10 . 9/28/2021
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Leonita Yap chapter 1 . 9/14/2021
hell! this is beautiful story!
michelle.stein chapter 20 . 9/10/2021
This was just the most delightful chapter. what a gloriously satisfying HEA!
SweetDash chapter 20 . 9/7/2021
Soooooooo cute!
sevgrey chapter 15 . 6/17/2021
Poor Ronald
Guest chapter 20 . 12/5/2020
Very enjoyable and well written. Love it.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/1/2020
This story started well, with an interesting premise, but went off the rails by abusing Ron so badly and portraying Draco, and especially Lucius, as supposedly reformed. Hermione as well - for someone who was supposed to be this paragon she accepted brutal Slytherin acts, and murderers, far too easily. Inconsistent characters drove this story downhill.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/1/2020
The story just took a wrong turn: if Draco had really changed, and Hermione was the wonderful person she is presented as, he wouldn’t have taken such a petty and destructive revenge on Hannah Abbott and Hermione wouldn’t have let him. Lucius killed her father! She’s entitled to hold a grudge. And what she did was essentially a slip of the tongue. For that she deserves to be driven out of business? Your characterization just went off a cliff. The story doesn’t work any more.
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