Reviews for A Clandestine Reality |
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![]() ![]() Luna and harry really? Other than that its an awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() 10000/10 AMAZING! I like this writing style and how the story progresses not too fast and not to slow. Great work author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. ️️ I loved it. In the end, you weren't too cruel to Ron. Very nice romance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the major dramas that occur but sometimes there are things that are unnecessary and I can't imagine the character doing so but it's a fanfiction so. Hermione having a big family with Draco was so petty and uncalled foorrr lmaoooooo I was laughing because I like drama. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so I started this story because it was on a rec list for slow burn Dramione, and the reviews were good. And I intend on finishing it, despite what I’m about to say. There is a PAINFUL amount of exposition. Not dialogue, not action, not an actual description of situations or story lines— just paragraph after paragraph of rambling thoughts. I get that every once in a while! But I’ve been forced to skim parts of every single chapter because of this. The points made during the exposition are either unnecessary to the story or they could be presented in a way more interesting way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron shouldn't be separated from Rose...he truly loved her despite her paternity |
![]() ![]() Short and sweet. I enjoyed it a lot 3 |
![]() ![]() great job liked it all! DRAMONIE 4 LIFE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i feel so bad for ron :(( |
![]() ![]() ![]() really, really cute story! |
![]() ![]() A satisfying ending. Thanks |
![]() ![]() Poor Ron, but he did start the ball rolling when swapping Hermione’s potions and insisting on seeing the Healer... |
![]() ![]() Well, that chapter was action-packed! |
![]() ![]() Great start and well-written… |