|Reviews for Let him be happy|
| xXxkinzeeeeeee18xXx chapter 2 . 3/11/2010
Gah... tisnt due to the awesumness of the Whore renesmee tis discontued to the UNAWESUMNESS! of the WHORE! ILY!:-*
| xXMidnightEssenceXx chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
aww, i wished u had finished this story;
i wrote a story in new moon thats DIDNT HAPPEN IN THE BOOK
| Carlizzle chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Im a tough critic- like you, so here it goes.
I didnt like it at all. It's completely out of character. And the plot is completely cliche. Maybe if you practiced writing before you subbmitted, you could have a better style of writing. plus, so far, it's just another imprint story. Make it good and I'll keep reading.
| LebaneseBella08TJ chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
great first chapter! i find it funny how a werewolf got scared of a squrrile..hehe
its nice for people to see how jake feels..wonder how this will turn out..
i know im not supposed to say update soon, but im saying it anyway:
UPDATE SOON! hmm...it does sound lame..how about..:
KEEP WRITING FOR THE SAKE OF WORLD PEACE!(or ill start WW3)
~from fatima, the lebanese bella:)~
| Insert-evil-laugh-here chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
This is great. it shows how jake feels.