Reviews for Scorched Earth
Aryck-The-One chapter 1 . 8/24/2017
I gotta say, I really like the first three chapters of this story, and how you give us a look at that darker side of the Fire Nation. Love the tension between Jomei- the proud Earth Kingdom minor- and Kanetsu- the ruthless Fire Nation mine boss. I can feel the raw hatred these men have for each other, the barely-contained urge to kill one another. I wish you'd focused more on that rather than have Jomei escape so quickly.

Still, this is certainly a story worth reading; it's not often someone can create a fan-fiction with so many OCs and have it written so well. But damn... 66 chapters? Gonna take me a while to finish this one.
Nikolai22 chapter 66 . 6/23/2016
A great journey, a magnificent journey.
Great characters mostly, and that one bitch.
All OC, well done for such a story.
Shitty endings but this is forgiven for I haven't come across one ending that I have approved of BESIDES one where the world ended and everyone died. (A story about Zuko's crew trying to prevent him and Katara getting together because the world would end.)
Main OCs are OP.

After some searching, there is rule34 based on this story for those interested.
My time here is at an end, but the journey was groovy.
Nikolai22 chapter 65 . 6/23/2016
Chapter 65:
Siensao is alive...bitch
Scratch that everyone is still alive.
Cept for Jomei.
If I wrote this it would have ended in all of them being burned to death.
But hey endings are hard. The hardest part IMO.
Nikolai22 chapter 64 . 6/23/2016
Chapter 64:
Did you drink cactus juice before making this chapter? Or maybe some strong alcohol?
Nikolai22 chapter 50 . 6/22/2016
Chapter 50:
If I may ask, was this story thought out and then written in full? Or were you one of those guys who would stop writing half way if there were no reviews? Should I have to pick one fan fiction that I would recommend to someone, this would be it. Either everything I've read so far was sub-par or you have great skill. Consider that the only serious fan fiction I have read (serious meaning a "story that is an actual sort and not porn or some shit") are of Avatar.

When you began writing, did you already plan on finishing no matter the comments is my question.
Nikolai22 chapter 48 . 6/22/2016
Chapter 48:
Spike needs to chill, I don't know what her plans are but there's too many signs that some cheese will happen. "Settle down big fella."
Nikolai22 chapter 42 . 6/22/2016
Chapter 42:
Forgive me, but would you read the very last sentence and explain what it means? Something has been hinted at in multiple chapters and forgive my lack of imagination in these regards but I have no idea what the F*** you're writing about. Or I had an idea but it would not make sense here.
Nikolai22 chapter 39 . 6/21/2016
Chapter 39:
It is interesting to see te relationship this story has with the actual series. I haven't much else to say, all this shit has been happening in these past chapters and I'm just like
Nikolai22 chapter 36 . 6/21/2016
Chapter 36:
It's funny how serious all this shit can be, and then the avatar is just Aang, a hyper 12 year old. But avatar Aang is the man. Came in clutch with that whole saving the world thing.
Nikolai22 chapter 35 . 6/21/2016
Chapter 35:
*barely containable laughter and the Toph level grins*
This is how I feel about this chapter, in a Rey positive way.
Nikolai22 chapter 32 . 6/21/2016
Chapter 32:
Just realized this is twice as long as the longest fan fic I've ever read, so this will be the longest one I've read when I finish.
Nikolai22 chapter 31 . 6/20/2016
Chapter 31:
*snaps fingers
Xin, with the scar! That's the same dai Lo agent that snitched on Azula!
I know that description was familiar lol. Never actually considered it but Joo Dee(s) would make perfect playthings. Cept for the smiles oh god creepy smiles.
Nikolai22 chapter 30 . 6/20/2016
Chapter 30:
Ah well, I really didn't expect things to go like THAT when Reki lost control.
Nikolai22 chapter 28 . 6/20/2016
Chapter 28:
Good shit good shit. I read on...
Nikolai22 chapter 27 . 6/19/2016
Chapter 27:
I was able to visualize this chapter amazingly.
When it comes to imagining what a setting or scene looks like, this was probably the most badass chapter. I only hope that others who read this chapter can get even half as much mental imagery from it as I did. Great.
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