Reviews for Disturbing the Peace
ShadowRoxas134 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Lol at Vivi. "I'm going to go give Pence a hug!"
overlord soran chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
haaahahaha you have earned feedback from the overlord of reviews. ok first i'd like to compliment your perfect blend of humor and romance, i'd also like to point out how well writen the plot is, on a final note i'm dualy impressed on the way you portrayed everyones personalitys. very few authors earn my respect so i hope you continue to write storys like these* rewards trophy*
OLunarCryO chapter 3 . 9/14/2008
Wow, I never realized you extended this. I like this version a lot. It's still sad and stuff, but at least it wasn't as "AH!" as the original-though that one was good too. lol.

LSDoom chapter 3 . 8/27/2008

haha! hilarious! XD
LSDoom chapter 2 . 8/1/2008
nice story so far.

please keep updating
OLunarCryO chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Aw, I got your message too late, I wanted to be first '(

Anyway, lol, this was hysterical!

""It's humping my leg! Get it off me! Olette! Hayner! Help!"

"Hit it with something! Anything! What's that?"

"It's a giant key! I don't know, you said anything!" "

Priceless! My favorite part of the whole story! I couldn't stop laughing and my mom thought I was chocking, lmao. I also loved the ending, it was perfect! Nicely done! Amazing as always K.! (i don't want to try spelling out your whole name, I'd massacare it, lol.)

You Rock!

Lilytoby chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Lol! laughed loads at "It's humping my leg!"