|Reviews for A Fine Line|
| walkingby521 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I do love a good fine line. It's so true though. Arguing and fighting is really just so passionate and intense that it makes sense to...uh, need release? Heh. Yes, we'll go with that. Nice work. A good balance between seedy, smutty sex and some anger and totally true to Drarry. :)
| Doni chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Great characterizations. Really well done.
| NicoleHeist chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
that was a very fine line crosed...im almost expecting to see what happend next :)
| haiylighGIRL chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
please finish this story please!
| lovefan81 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Oh boy! To quote Harry “that was something else.” ;-)
| Bradhadair-71 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
I love it when Harry likes it rough... Never more Gryffindor than this, yeah. Great stuff!
| DarlingMalfoyxx chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Draco was perfect.
That is all. ;)
| x-charcoal-moon-x chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
omg that was so good!
thats so good!
kinda scary at first :S but then WO!
id reeli like it if u would read my story "deck the halls with bells of envy" im kinda stuck after the 3rd chapter and would aprreciate comment or ideas of what 2 do next and u seem so good at writing i thought mayB u could suggest something?
| Raelin Lupin chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Ah! This is the best pairing EVER. Yay!
| hieisdragoness18 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
| Dreamer Of Dragons chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
That was AMAZING! Sequel please? I love it!
| Tinuviel Simbelmyne chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
I liked it)
| koorimechick chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
aw. poor harry. it was like he did all that for malfoy and didn't enjoy it. harry need release too you know.
| MissBehavior chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Wow, this must be the first one-shot I have ever read (and I've read a lot of them) that is actually very believable. I love a good Drarry-fic, but most of the time you do realise that the odds that it is going to happen are quite small. But with this fic, I really didn't think that. I'm sure it has to do with the realistic smutt-part, considering the fact that there are a lot of fics in which Draco and Harry punch the crap out of each other, then snog the next moment, and probably have mind-blowing sex after that. It's not always believable, but you managed it. I'm sure that if JKR would write slash it would be like this.
Nice written! (And this must be my longest review for a one-shot, ever xD )
| A.Written.Tragedy chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I hope you plan on writing their 'next time' :P