Reviews for the falcon cannot hear the falconer
Keltena chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
I... oh god. Nearly crying my eyes out here. A good amount of this is elaborating on dialogue from the original, but you do it so well, and you've captured Momo perfectly. Her desperation to believe in Aizen, somehow, and the way that projects itself as blame towards herself and Gin... really great job, is all I can say.

Keep writing - humor, angst, you do it all well.
KuronoMizu chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Ohmigod, this is so good (as expected from you :D). It really shows the distressed inner state and turmoil of Hinamori's psyche that many people just don't seem to get, and instead are quick to judge. She was used and is in denial, and you've captured her voice very well.
Crystaline-Crimson chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I love this fic. I can't really say anything else - I just love it. TTTT