Reviews for The Birth of the Araiki Clan
Guest chapter 14 . 3/17
When I read "chakra didn't flow" I had a sudden vision of the guru from Avatar the last Airbender " The chakra flows"
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16
ok this story is boring and you didn't even tell what the bloodline was on top of that taking the kyuubi away? come on dude that ruins the whole story.
somebody chapter 31 . 6/21/2013
dude what is up with the blocks
btalover chapter 31 . 5/15/2013
update soon! it is such a great story!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 19 . 5/14/2013
Good chapter! Keep this up!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 18 . 5/11/2013
Ne heh heh heh...Hello Tsunade. I've been waiting for you to enter the story!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 16 . 5/9/2013
Oh...My...Gosh...oh my gosh...oh my gosh, oh my gosh! OH MY GOSH! YOU'RE TRYING TO KILL YUGITO! AREN'T YOU?! AREN'T YOU?!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 15 . 5/9/2013
MWA HA HA HA HA! THE LAST BIT! ABSOLUTLY PRICELESS! Now to other matters...I think the way you've done the techniques, and backstory is quite good. I at first was beginning to think Naru, and Yugito were slightly overpowered...But considering where they got their abilities...It only seems natural they would be slightly...Ok more than slightly OP. I admit my most recent Naruto versions have been quite OP but it makes sense when you get down into it *Shrugs* Anyways keep this up! I love this fic!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 13 . 5/8/2013
Heh heh heh heh! Jiraiya is always the funnest character to write about! Especially when Naruto kicks him into the hot springs and he get's mobbed by angry women...MWA HA HA HA HA!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 11 . 5/8/2013
*head snaps forward and eyes widen significantly* OHHHH crap...N-nej...don't do it...PLEASE just don't kill the kid...Or Naruto and Yugito will kill you...Just PLEASE don't do it...
Bubblekins1010 chapter 9 . 5/8/2013
And so the fun begins...
Bubblekins1010 chapter 8 . 5/8/2013
Eh, heh, heh, heh...I would feel bad for Sakura...But she SOOOOOOO deserved it...
Bubblekins1010 chapter 7 . 5/8/2013
THIS IS AWSOME! KEEP IT UP!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
MWA HA HA HA HA! YOU HAVE BROUGHT IN ASUMA, AND SHIKA (One of my fav characters so you know), AND INO, AND OF COURSE CHOJ! YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY!
Bubblekins1010 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Interesting idea...I'll have to continue.
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