Reviews for Uzumaki Naruto, Genin Of Team Ten
Guest chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
this was too good to be abandoned if i am reading the update stamp right
Crow-DarkHeart chapter 6 . 6/2/2014
You need to continue this it is amazing.
Scoobygirl45 chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
The story seems pretty interesting so far, I like how you aren't rushing the relationship :)
XXoukouyoneXX chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
i like the story but it's too much like cannon if i wanted cannon i would would read the manga
Ryu Senju Uchiha chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
Reclusive Dork chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Can I give you a character? His name is Riegin Dao, a Traveling warrior from the Southern Sea.

He has long dark brown hair tied into a Ponytail with wild bangs, electric blue eyes, and a swirling scar over his left eye and forehead. he wears no shirt, but has bandages halfways up his body, with red martial arts pants, a chinese loincloth-thing(whatever that thing is called) and black and red gauntlets. his weapon of choice is a large black and grey Jian sword, but he also has several other weapons on him(which he made himself, but named most of them in japanese). They're like the Seven swordsmen, only there's only five, Six if you count his Shadow-manipulating Jian(which is named Luo Bau)

Mar Long-a sword whose blade looks like a marlin's nose and dorsal fin fused. It's power is rather like samehada, only without the chakra absorption- instead, it has a nullifying power. you can still fuse with it though, but you get this massive rapier connected on your good arm that looks like a marlin's nose.

Sakkayui(Writer's Edge)-a sword that has a vein of chakra-saturated poisonous ink running through it, and a well of said ink in the handle.

Kebab-a giant sharpened toothpick(with a handle) that is so saturated with chakra, it's cutting power is enough to split the sky with a very weak swing. but if you don't know how to use it,and your chakra doesn't match with it, you'll hurt yourself... badly. it's also made from a wood that is impervious to flame.

Ranbunkizu(Papercut)-Giant scissors that separate into two large swords. They're really good against mokuton, and they allow the user to access mokuton as well. cool, right?

Unagiyougan(Magma Eel)-Based on the Snake swords from Soulcalibur, this weapon can lash out as a bladed whip, only with a twist. this one has the ability to cloak itself in volcanic flames, and/or liquify into molten metal(very hot). You can fuse with it to gain invincibility to heat.

he would be a traveler from the south seeking refuge in Konoha. His Offer? To train Five pupils in the art of Supreme Dynasty Warfare. These Five pupils will be tested before they receive training, and if they pass the test, they will receive one of his Six Swords (actually five, the sixth is reserved for him and his successor).

If you need info on how he acts, he's wise, but he's not jolly old man wise. he's battle worn. and rather sarcastic. and he hates bell peppers.
Jose19 chapter 6 . 9/6/2012
I love the this chapter and I want to see it updated as soon as you can because I want to find out the results of this mission.
Jose19 chapter 4 . 9/6/2012
I like this story a great deal and I will give this a good review so keep it up and update as soon as you can.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This story is well written and has the potential to be very good and I like the pairing of Ino and Naruto instead of Sakura and I want to see how strong both of them become under this team so please update soon.
Jose19 chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
This is an interesting story because of the possible pairing of Ino and Naruto together and I wan to see how they both interact together as a Team.
XxFlameofDeathxX chapter 6 . 7/21/2012
Post soon, plz
thewonderingman chapter 6 . 6/16/2012
I think I might like this story not sure yet, but its possible.

I thought it was very easy to follow, it was easy to read, very smooth read.

I thought the characters where well developed, there personalities never wavered.

It was nice and romantic, with a tinge of fluff.

I love the naruto ino pairing, there aren't enough of this kind if you ask me.

Anyways I'll stick around and continue reading this story.
Starstalker chapter 6 . 5/4/2012
Really good story so far would like to see it finished.
Tanneal chapter 5 . 4/6/2012
Very nicely built foundation, I have to say. Your story, while is following the Canon, has a very good reason for the pairing as well as the different kind of growth in Naruto. Very nice, keep up the good work and update soon.
Warpwind chapter 6 . 6/4/2011
surprisingly good thing it is a pity you abandoned it
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