Reviews for Sunburn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() They should have made this into an episode (somewhere between episodes 4 and 5 I think). This was such a cute and innocent fanfic, especially for the highly epic and otherwise totally masculine Gurren Lagann series. Yoko's so awesome. I like how you made her character act real motherly and affectionate in this one. This one's going in my favourites! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it when people remember that there's more to Gurren Lagann than massive amounts of epic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of course Kamina would fight the sun! Such a sweet and badass sentiment. This fic plastered a dopey smile on my face. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...that...was...ADORABLE! Aw! I would've loved to help Simon with his sunburn... anyway...this was just so flipping cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! This is so cute! That's just like Kamina to say they'ii fight the sun. Please make more of this pairing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More please! I can't belive there are only 2 Simon and Kamina fics! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. Cute. I always like fics that expand on the premise of the original. Also... Simon acts like Simon, Kamina like Kamina. What can I say? On the critique side, there are some minor capitalization and grammar oddities. Nothing major. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was just so cute! It makes sence that they would have that problem with not much sun light and all. I'm not a bag fan of Yoko, but I loved how you portraid Simon and Kamina. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I'm the first reviewer for this wonderful piece. Aww...that was an adorable story and you kept everyone in character. The sunburn idea was realistic too. It's nice to see a good Gurren Lagann story. Great job. |