|Reviews for First Kiss|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
YOU SHOULD HAVE PUT THE LEMON SCENE MMMMAAAANNNNN!
| Karoimirth chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
My brain died too xD
Lovely. Nothing more to say
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
| wing fire 24 chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
my brain has turned to mush again. lalalalala more time waster heheheheheh so cuuuute i feel like a fluffy cloud, oh so high in the sky nyaaaaa hehehe, funny stupid L. hehehe
| Larry Letter chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
| Art-Of-Escape chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
That was excellent! 15 thumbs up.
| ceres51892 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
XD That last line had me about falling out of my chair with pleasure and amusement. "'I could be your other first, too.' L's brain died." That was perfect. I almost can't believe Light said that!
But it was amazing. Thank you for stalling your bedroom cleaning to write this.
| Laimielle chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I like this very much. :) It's so sweet. This is how I'd imagine L's first time ever being close to someone. Gorgeous writing, almost poetic at some parts. I really enjoyed it.
| AoiBaraKa chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
HOPE U DONT DIE FROM UR RADIACTIVE ROOM B4 U CAN WRITE MORE! _
| LookingForMeaning chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
I love the last line. Just thought I should tell you that.
Oh my god, I didn't even think it was possible for L to lose his composure like that. Damn him, my first kiss wasn't ANYTHING like that. But I don't think any normal person's is anyway, so it's not fair of me to complain. I guess that's why it's L! Love it; insta-fav!
| La Vita a Colori chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
oh no! he killed L's brain! haha that would definitely NOT help in catching kira.
| Anime Tenshi 892 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
i love the ending. i nearly choked on the pepsi i was drinking. it was so unexpected. :)
| Wasabikitty10 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
I love the ending. "L's brain died" is the most awesome ending you could have. Very nice little fic, I enjoyed it a lot! They seem the slightest bit OOC to me, though. But that's probably just me and my anal retentive morning brain.
| Eloquent Catastrophe chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I adored this. Great work as always. I'd say the end was amusing, what with the "L's brain died." It was cute :) Really, the whole thing was just adorably sweet (and also pretty hot, just thought I'd put that out there).
| kyomaki-is-love chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Love the ending! LxLight FTW!