|Reviews for California, Here I come|
| ellis chapter 18 . 10/6
is this the end?
| Motherof8 chapter 18 . 2/9/2015
Great story. Will it ever be finished? A nice long epilogue?
| Motherof8 chapter 6 . 2/9/2015
| Motherof8 chapter 4 . 2/9/2015
Way to go bella!
| KiuZ chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Are U kidding me...it's great !
| Coffeyhouse101 chapter 18 . 10/13/2013
Update please your story is absolutely amazing and I love how u made edward change his ways when he met bella cause he felt something for her. And I lile how u have some drama but not a lot of it. Thank u for writing this and I encourage u to keep writing. And if u get a flame don't worry about it cause that person is crazy cause your story rocks!
| vampiregirl31 chapter 18 . 11/19/2012
aww i love it i want more
| mayacullen86 chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
| AnuluvesTwilightSeries chapter 18 . 11/6/2011
Awww wowwww I loved this fanfic Bella changed Edward totally I mean before Bella Edward was like a player bt when Bella came in Edward life he changed for her awwww loved it enjoyed reading all chapters bt awww damn dis fanfic is also discontinued so sad
| VictoriaChronus chapter 9 . 8/15/2010
oki generally like the story and the plot is nice to, but sometimes i feel like you are moving to fast. you cut too many details therefore making it look rushed. like on moment she's asleep then the next she's already at school the next day.
| Writer-Dramaqueen chapter 18 . 7/8/2010
(Marches around with pitchforks) more! More! More!
| Writer-Dramaqueen chapter 9 . 7/8/2010
Ok, since I loved it here's what I wanna say:
"Go Eddie, go Eddie!"
| Writer-Dramaqueen chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
| AllisonteamEmmett chapter 18 . 7/7/2010
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE PLEASE! You haven't since December 13th OF 2008! Please update soon!
| Jessie Cullen-Potter chapter 18 . 4/24/2010
next chapter soon plz!
keep up the amazin chapters!