Reviews for The Secret of Takeout
Blurring Fandoms chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Love it! Love Chinese too. Now I want some. Great...
hifield chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Chinese food sounds much more appealing after your story ... yum, yum. Very enjoyable.
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Very cute. And I loved how Jennifer came back and got her kiss.

Thanks for posting.
Mara-DragonMaster chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Aww, so sweet! You really captured Dr. Keller and Ronon. Awesome job! And yes, Chinese food in their white boxes, eaten with chopsticks, DOES make the food taste better!

God bless!

Passionate Heart chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
AW! This was way cute! You should have him eat sushi... how would you think he would respond to that? lol. Great job though! Keep up the good work!
Pocus chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
That was cute. Nice job with keeping them in character. I could see the whole thing as it went along.
white raven chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
This has to be one of my favorites. The scene is very natural-him stabbing his food with the chopsticks, her laughing and basically spitting rice across the table. This kind of stuff happens, and it serves to bring the reader fully into the scene to enjoy it.

I love the fact that he's willing to try new stuff for her, even when he thinks it's stupid. And the end? Very telling that he gets it right.
deal4321 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Cute! Loved it! Thanks for writing & sharing! :-)
Blencathra chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I reviewed this on your LJ site Reni but I love it some much I have to say so again. So...

sezjara chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Oh, I like how you did this. It's actually believable.

I'm not sure what I like better, her feeding him, or the kiss...

hmm, maybe both.

Good job!
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Great story! I love it!
Laby Anne Boleyn chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
very nice! :)
Nika Dixon chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
The part about Jen walking backwards away from him at the end was a completely perfect ending to the scene. I could picture her doing exactly that in my head. Awesome little story!
SingingShooter chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
it is short but it is very cute!
tripwatcher2 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Good for Jen - finally getting her kiss! Great little story!
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