|Reviews for The Assassin in the Smoky Shadow|
| Laconeko chapter 1 . 2/27
So, for the first time (okay, not really the first time, I've read other stories by you but bear with me) we see an actual ninja in a story about 'ninja', and he disguises his proper-ninja-behaviour by going undercover as a normal-narutoverse-'ninja'.
His difficulty in training a successor is also something I find amusing.
| Pandas01 chapter 1 . 2/23
Wow dude this was really really good! I very much enjoyed reading it! :3
| AnonOne chapter 1 . 1/30
Hmmmm... I think a lot of the jobs were portrayed too easily. Somehow, there were too little mistakes, too few complications to his work and that alone makes Naruto looking more overpowered than he actually is. The Raikage shouldn't have been that easy to kill and ninja/shinobi are technically supposed to specialize more in stealth and deception. It's very contradictive to the general abilities of a shinobi, despite a lot of them are straightforward fighters.
Not really realistic despite the downplay in powerful abilities Naruto would possess.
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
So um... is Naruto a jinchuuriki here? It doesn't seem like he is. Great writing and great story anyway. :D
| fantasymaniac17 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
This was awesome! It always annoys me when all the ninja go for destructive power and flashy when it's like come on! A little brain power and weak stuff would work so much better! I loved this!
| lil dynamic chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
In under 10 thousand words you have done something most authors never accomplish, you have made it past the chuuin exams and the 3 year time skip, this is one of the best stories I've ever read and very creative.
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
An interesting direction towards a smarter, and much subtler Naruto, a bit sad too, he isn't really portrayed as having any deeper connections to anyone, besides his sensei.
| Slytherin Studios chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I love this story, amazing job!
| Umei no Mai chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Great story; a truly powerful Naruto.
| Deadziplen chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Every time I read this I think that Iruka is the other legendary Assassin that isn't dead
| Deadzepplin chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Iruka Must have been a legendary assassin WOOOOOW he was a really good one too
| VampiricBloOdyRose chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This was an awesome story, I absolutely love it. _
| lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Damn this is cool. Great work as always.
| rajvir chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I liove this story t is awesome as always almost all your storys are awesome that is why you are one of my favorite authors
| Loiosh311 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I'm currently reading through most if not all of your stories and have found them all to be amazing! hope for more in the near future