Reviews for Montepulciano
Geor-Geor Binks chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Man,gr8 start!Yeah,I'm with Ani on this one...Ugh,Palo...slimy
nerfherder...XD This is definitely a promising story,but DUUUDE! You must update!I command you to update!
(futiley attempts to use a mind-trick) I mean,6years and your
still on Ch.1? So,once again,update pleeeaaase,I must knows what happens with Palo!

Geor-Geor
wilkins chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
this is a great story, please update soon! It's got so much potential!
chucknotsteve chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
i enjoy the story. an update is in order.
eirene1988 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Great start. Update soon!
FutureOscarWinner94 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
interesting story
StoryGirl02 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
'Palo crossed the barrier and smiled a sickeningly sweet smile, “Thank you Jedi, you may go now.”'

In short, best line ever!

Palo gives off this stalker vibe in your writing. Now, if this was meant to be or not-it doesn't really matter-I'd just like to say that your writing gave me the sense of Palo wanting Padme and doing ANYTHING to get her!

Are you going to continue?
MD chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I liked it. Everyone, especially anakin, seemed very in character. Good job! Palo, pf, gotta hate him.

Well, can't wait for more!
FlyingFaeriesDance chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Nicely done.

I'm with Anakin I don't like Palo either.

FlyingFaeriesDance
ThE-CrAzY-01 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Nice start. Palo gives off this stalker vibe.
GlamPiano chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
great chapter please update
mlhkvh5 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
This is a great beginning to your story! Something about Palo seems eerie, that came across in your writing. This is very good, I will look forward to your next update!