Reviews for Goin' Places
Mahsa FF chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Oh, that was an almost heartbreaking story, but you handled it so gently that it felt uplifting at the same time. You know I don't know Rachel at all from the show, but I did feel like I got to know her quite well in, what?, a thousand words.

I especially liked the images of the homestead: "Newly whitewashed, it gleamed like a precious pearl in the golden twilight" and the buckboard: "that buckboard might as well have been a golden coach bedecked with precious gems" Your words revealed so beautifully how highly she valued what those two things represented for her life.

Lovely, Malianani!
DayDreamer P chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
This story is beautiful, romantic and melancholic at the same time. I like it very much!

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