Reviews for Carnival Lights
ayame81131 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
Write a sequal!
Lostish chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
aw. how sweet
easilyobsessedctc chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I really thought this was ver good! It was well written!
Sakura Panda63 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Is there going to be a part II? But if not, it was still a good one-shot.

Keep writing
Kaku-chan chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Awsome story!
Warrior Dae chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
OMG! I LOVED THIS! IF IT WEREN'T WITH MY SIS IN EAR SHOT I WOULD HAVE BEEN LAUGHING HARD. BUT SHE ALWAYS ASKS ME WHAT'S GOING ON, SO I CAN'T LAUGH AS HARD AS I WANT. [ BUT I STILL LOVED IT! COULD U MAYBE CHECK OUT MY SASUSAKU STORY?
Fireyoukaigirl chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
"Now Neji will go tap dance naked with Lee on top of the Eiffel tower."

I seriously fell out of my seat laughing. That was just too good. Loved the story.
alayneni chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I hope there is a sequel to this.
it'sSao chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Well, that was incredibly hot. :P

I like it.

Well, obviously, when you have a story with Sakura and Sasuke as leads and a make-out scene by the leads you get something hot. EVERY TIME. Haha.
candyluver chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Lol. LOVE the ending. I luv this! It was so cute and just aw! I love it!
extraordinaire chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Aw! This was absolutely adorable. Seriously. I love carnivals with all my heart; the rides, the funnel cake, the memories, but NOT the ferris wheel. I have serious ferris wheel issues.

But making out with guys and licking stuff of their cheeks?

yeah...that's okay with me. It's never happened, but hey, there's a possibiblity for everything.

HAVE FUN IN HAWAII!
UpperEastSiders chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
OMFG I LOVE IT! PPLEASE UPDATE ASAP! _
nickygirl chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
well it was quick to get into action. it was awesome. haha nice writing and makes a great chapter. can't wait for update.
haliz chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
a sequel

a sequel

a sequel

please or i swear ill dye

please please please
inner-emerges chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Its COL! Make a seq or sth!
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