Reviews for Mistakes
JamieDidn'tDieInCulloden chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
A great story. Very well written.
AngelofDarkness013 chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
That was very great. I've always wondered about Jasper, and the rest of the Cullens that left the scene.

I am glad that you've posted this. Nicely done.
JennieWithAnIE chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
AWW... this is soo sad, it made me want to cry, luckily i had a friend tell me not to, so i tried my hardest not too...anyways, this is a really good story, you should try and send it to stephenie meyers and see what she don't have to, but it's a suggestion...again, great story!
RockMafia93 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
No, no,I think it's a good story. I can only imagine how Jasper must feel, when he attacked Bella. He felt like he'd let everyone down, and it was all his fault. Poor Jasper. He's my favorite, and I have mad love for him...
WriterFormerlyKnownAsTL chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
I like the emotion! Very well done!
andthenshesaid chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Pretty Good. I love Jasper!
ff9moonie chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
even if u hate it, I love it

xXx.La.tua.cantante.xXx chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
very good. i love this point of view. please, please update again.
vaporeon13204 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
That was completely AWESOME~! I think that you captured everyone very well in this story. I also appreciate that you took into account Jasper's ability while writing. Absolutely loved it.
Cetesy chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
extremely well written! i really liked it. jasper's characterization is powerful!