|Reviews for Fusion|
| arrrgylepirate chapter 5 . 5/29/2009
The most perfect ending anyone could have come up with for this series. Loved it! Your format was a bit confusing at first with the dialogue and thoughts but I got used to it quickly. Well done!
| omgahitsbritt08 chapter 5 . 1/21/2009
Believe it or not at first I thought it was cliche. But I actually love this series. You gave real feelings. I really hope Cameron and House end up together in the new season.
| reader2008 chapter 5 . 7/23/2008
so short. why is it soo short?
finally is all i can say. i agree with the house. (he's the bold print right?) yay! i love house and cam. lol.
| NDcountry10 chapter 5 . 7/23/2008
Yay! Happy ending! Very well done.
| SilvaK chapter 5 . 7/23/2008
That was a great ending!The whole series were full of the tension between them and all their colliding feelings and here they found the most wonderful expression...I loved the way you connected all your stories with just two small sentences:"It’s an end not just to this act, but to your inertia, your paralysis. You have collided, and the momentum has carried you here. To this time and this place where you have fused with another person, someone you love.".Great work indeed...I'm looking forward to anything new by you...Bye for now...
| Gertrude2034 chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
That was lovely. Really nice job - well done.
| SexyScottishDoc chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
haha, 'it's about damn time'. House speak for I love you. brillant! awesome fic
| Josie Griffin chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
Amazing...just amazing. loved every line. the pacing in the entire series was nothing short of perfect and this closing is wonderful. ive alway been drawn to the stories that show the tension and the before they are together aspects and emotions and yours was simply amazing. Thank you so much for writing this! and i loved the closing lines. great format and all around exceptional job.
| daisyb10 chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
"You have collided, and the momentum has carried you here. To this time and this place where you have fused with another person, someone you love."
I love these lines and how perfectly they tie this series together.
Congratulations, JB! This was a devilishly difficult story to write and you succeeded brilliantly!
| lucindadixon chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
“It’s about damn time.”
I love you too.
Perfect, just perfect. This whole series is brilliant the way they start of so separate...separate stories even...and finish up thinking as one.
I'm sad its over, but look forward to reading anything else you write.
| lillianrose4 chapter 5 . 7/22/2008
Wow, just bloody wow, beautiful and angsty. Thanks.
| daisyb10 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
"You huff impatiently and wave your cane. “Am I ever going to get to talk here? We could have done this whole thing in five minutes if you’d just shut up.”
I like this insight into the way the males of our species think.
Make it quick, get to the point, let me fix things for you.
I have a feeling that once House and Cameron touch there will be no backing away from this relationship.
Beautifully written, JB.
| daisyb10 chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
"Or will you continue to live a coward’s life, never having given it a shot?"
My favourite line ...
I sense this story starting to turn in this chapter. It's, dare I say, hopeful.
| NDcountry10 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
Oh! Two chapters in one day. I feel so spoiled. Finally, House has opened up. Hopefully we are through with the angst. I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter.
| reader2008 chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
hm! i like it. hm!
chappy please, jb. (*now!). i'm very impatient remember. lol.