|Reviews for Me & Mrs Jones|
| leaf.does.not.wither chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I dont seek out KibaIno stories, but when talented writers give their take I usually enjoy it. So far, youve built a really nice story and Im really looking forward to see how it unfolds! Everyone seems very comfortable in these roles youve assigned them and (there I say) theres potential for all kinds of stories in there! Maybe after youre done, you could write about this certain Uchiha officer meeting a particularly pink-haired doctor *cough* Im shameless *cough* hehe, anyway, good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Lol, this chapter was really funny. Update soon!
| dirtandskye chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
i'm excited for the next chapter!
| shelvesinthecloset chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I really liked this, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it!
| AGENT KELL chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
hey kate, :D
sorry about leaving early yesterday, i needed sleep.
:D me likes this, really much. i like the idea, i like how kiba is unlucky and how everything seems to go so smoothly, how there are so many conflicts between them already~
:D and of course i love your writing.
and is excited at the idea of what will happen next.
update soon deary!
| Nordic Angel chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
This is a really good first chapter.
The characters are belivable and true to themselves, even though they are in a completely new and different setting.
The pace of the story is just right and the formulations in your sentences are just superb.
I can't wait to read the next chapters!