|Reviews for Breathless|
| LyraMusica chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
SO SWEET! I loved their creative insults. LOL. You're an awesome author! Good job!
| DeathBySugarCube chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
such a good story and it made my smile and go "awwww, cute" at the end.
You should do a second chapter where Al or pinako come in, because i always find those scenes very funny, and can you imagine ed and winry's reactions? they would be blushing and putting tomatoes to shame and being really funny and loud and really embarrassed! :D
| Poisoned Scarlet chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Ek, all of your EdWin oneshots are so cute and fluffy, I shall definately save some of them for the more depressing or boring days ahead of me xD
| 12122016 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Cute fluffs! *click* favorite now!
| iloveme0808 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
really cute and funny!
i love it!
edWin all the way!
| DutchCherry12 chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
it was freaking AWSOME!
i can't beleave that you wrote that wen you where boredO_o
anyways i faved again
| Seirin chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Swet! I love this kind of romance stories:D
| wabisabija chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
E! -dies from fluff attack-
Ahem. Okay, this was absolutely fantastic. So in character. I can definately see this happening. It was well written. Keep up the good work!
| momoxtoshiro chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Kawaii desu! I loved it! Yay EdxWinry!
| Microsuede Mouse chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Fantastic story! I love how that played out... Well-written, thanks for posting!
| FreyaLin chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
wow they made out hella bad! that was hott! hahhaha buh anywaise great story btw! the ending was a bit sappy buh its all good -
| Eriisu chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
This was so funny! And so KAWAII! I loved it! I'm only sad that this was a one-shot! Great job! You should write more like these!
| EmilyLTeague chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
i really liked it. it was really good
| Sakimono chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
WOW!I love this oneshot! It rox my sox,shoes,shirt,underwear ... Ect.
| EvanescenceKrazed chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
omg! that waz so freaking awesome! i loved it! great job!