|Reviews for A Series of Firsts|
| karen1025 chapter 15 . 12/20/2013
That was really good.
My only inquiry is when did jack sparrow entered the story and how did he meet will? (when James comes back from hiss first trip Elizabeth asks about pirates and James tells her that will and jack are in Tortuga, but until that point the story hadn't introduced jack).
Could you send me a copy of this story and the prequel? my mail is karenkluge hotmail . com
| Merydhrae chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
That was the best :) And your vignettes are amazing! Thanks a lot for that great moment!
| nitefang chapter 9 . 7/9/2013
THAT HAD TO BE THE MOST ROMANTIC LINE I HAVE EVER HEARD IN MY LIFE
| JDLuvaSQEE chapter 9 . 7/18/2012
Loved this chapter! The ending was so sweet!
| JDLuvaSQEE chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Poor James and Lizzie! Great story!
| Silvertongued Dreams chapter 15 . 1/28/2012
Beautiful! Just beautiful! :D *weeps*
| Silvertongued Dreams chapter 13 . 1/28/2012
What does OTP mean?
So sooo good!...
| Silvertongued Dreams chapter 12 . 1/28/2012
I think for obvious reasons this chappie is my favorite! :D Norribeth, sweet Norribeth... Elizabeth is the only woman I would give James up to without as much of a begrudging and wounded heart because at least I know he would be happy :D
Well done, my friend! :D
| Silvertongued Dreams chapter 11 . 1/8/2012
HOW COULD YOU KILL GOV. SWANN! HOW COULD YOU! (SOBS)
| elanordaughterofeowyn chapter 15 . 1/8/2012
This story was brilliant. I feel bad that I didn't review every chapter, but I was just so taken with the story, who has time to reveiw when you want to know what happens next? I am rather impatient. :D
I love your work and write more. Norrington is my favorite!
| Snookis Situation chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
This is the first time I actually checked out a fanfic so it is my first fanfic review as well as my first fanfic read ever. I hope you dont mind some constructive criticism.
You have a very good writing style that made these chapters an easy and entertaining read. I must admit it was also moving in quite a few spots. However, what couldve made the story even better is less "fan" and more "fiction" as in canon fiction. You dont have to go out of character (Will the cad) to make your idea work. Quite the contrary, if Norribethd overcome Elisabeths love for Will as a worthy suitor (which he is in canon), it wouldve been more compelling story.
Also, less fangirl version of Norrington (too mild, too sweet, too perfect gentleman, too puppy love) and more canon Norrington (warrior, stern as steel, cunning, vulnerable, roguish, conflicted, explosive,etc) would make the story more beleavable.
| Illusion of the Mirror chapter 12 . 8/11/2010
My! But that was sinfully delicious!
You have done a remarkable job of building up to this moment and making it into a meaningful emotional as well as sensual experience. It was well written for your first attempt.
But then, all your work so far has been well-written!
Alas! It is far to late! You have kept me awake for a second night in a row! I must to bed. I shall return!
| Illusion of the Mirror chapter 11 . 8/11/2010
This chapter was so laden with emotion. You have a talent for such writing! I'm duly impressed!
| Illusion of the Mirror chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
His patience and restraint speaks volumes of his love and respect. Your writing has made me love James Norrington all the more.
| Illusion of the Mirror chapter 9 . 8/11/2010
Wonderful, but I've no time for a proper review...must read on!