|Reviews for Your Little Discovery|
| Dreams.Rewritten chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
Great story! :) please updatee son this is too good of a story to give up!
| a chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
Can you write more of this story, I want to know what the big threat is.
| Aero Angemon chapter 2 . 9/20/2008
The story was good a few spelling errors but still good. Can't wait to read more. Good luck with the story and I will look forward to reading more. Aero
| bonnie chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
hope you ahve more chapters because that was cool!
| bonnie chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
You could make it a little longer
| AbnoxiousBlonde chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
Um, not to be rude, but you need to proofread your chapters more thoroughly before posting them.
Like, in the second sentence, you used "meeting" twice in such a way that it gets repetitive.
Other than the spelling/grammar errors, great job!
| SugarSpiral chapter 2 . 7/18/2008
Not bad :)
Suspense... Guessing the meeting is going to be about Hikari's sickness?
A small point though, you overuse words too much:
"they were going to a meeting with the other digidestined after Takeru asked for a meeting. Takeru had wanted to talk to Hikari before they had left for the meeting" rerading the word 'meeting' three times in two sentances is boring.
You did the same with 'little kids'.
| fangsangel chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
this sounds like it could grow into a good storyline. However your second chapter is the same as the first. that can be fixed. and it would be more interesting if you made the chapters longer and fixed some grammer mistakes. keep writing
| SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
A very strong start :)
Nice little point about the locker combination...
I can tell this is going to be good :)