Reviews for The Price of Freedom
crazysmile15 chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
Yay! LOVE LIVES ETERNAL! XD
crazysmile15 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
TEE HEE, SNEAK ATTACK!
Evildevilangel chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
*smiles* I love the bit about him feeling "thoroughly fond of life".
Bean chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
This was a fantastic beginning, so don't trip over that.

Only criticism- Finish it! We must have more! oh yes... 3
Gallifrey-born chapter 2 . 9/22/2008
Love it! Keep it up mate!
Harlequin Jade chapter 2 . 9/2/2008
Damn. I love this chapter... I love it! Caspians last line is great...Lol!
yaoifangirlHolly chapter 2 . 8/5/2008
Wow, really good, yummy and sweet.

Loved the bit about Caspian tugging at Peter's lip and the fire in his stomach...
Holly chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Wow, well done. Will read the next few chapters...
FrankieSunflower chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. It was MEAN to leave me hanging on the first! I will write you a one-shot as a thanx
FrankieSunflower chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I swear to god if you write an M rated sequel i will write a short series in your HONOR
Livi-kunxXxChibi-chan chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
WOW...that was good. The pairing was interesting, this was one of the first Peter/Caspian fics I've read. I'm very glad it was my first!
burstingfruits chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
ooh i quite liked the characterisation is this! how Caspian reacts to killing his own people was wonderful! and yes, i would love you to continue it [:
alexiel369 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Hi!

I'm a spanish girl, so apologize my english.

I send you a review because I like your history and I love that you continue it, with more Peter-Caspian love, of course.

So continue it, please!
quantuminferno chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I would like to see you continue because the kiss was so sudden and a bit incongruous with what Caspian was saying that explaining his sort of point of view or reasoning would be nice.

Overall I think you did a good job setting up the mood with your descriptions. I'm kind of split with Peter's awkwardness at dealing with Caspian's tears because his bluntness could be seen as that desire to just make him stop crying or it could be something you could try to hash out a little more (idk which one you were going for).

I think that's it. I like your writing and I think you definitely should continue. _
Tigger101 chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Concrit criticism, hm? I liked it.

I'm not a fan of slash by any means (but if I WAS then Caspian/Peter would probably be high on my list) - but I enjoyed this. You adressed something that most people probably forgot during the course of the movie and the happy scenes by the end - Caspian was fighting against his own people, and to someone so young and hesitant about his position, this would have broken him. The characterisation of the two boys was excellent, and the language as Peter watched and tried to comfort him in the battlefield was beautifully written. I think where you faltered is expanding on the feelings between them, and the kiss - it was introduced fairly late into the piece, and the reader had a sense of loss; that the ideas could have been expanded more, the feelings and thoughts of Peter... I don't know.

[Alternatively, it almost feels like it "didn't happen" because it was over so quick - and that brings across Peter's feelings of disorientation at the end through very strongly]