|Reviews for Torment|
| spoby4eva chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
| styling16 chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
O_O wow i'm speechless...are you going to continue this? please continue this! please!
| Summaiya Mahmood chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
um wow, that's the only word I can think of for this story otherwise i'm just speechless. wow.
| Uxiegirl chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
Very good. It's called a tragedy, by the way. You probably don't want a history lesson, but just know that the Greeks seperated dramas into two catagories: comedy and tragedy. A comedy has a happy ending, and a tragedy has a sad one.
Anyway, it's very good.
| girl278 chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
damn you & your brilliance!
| girl278 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i love how you've introduced the characters, through the prologue, it gets a little tiring just hearing/reading metaphorical words that don't give any insight, just emotion.
but you have written this with both insight, and emotive language
| limella chapter 2 . 3/18/2009
how you describe how bella feels about Edward leaving her is as good as new moon. Great story. Keep writing pls!
| AbbyAnarchy chapter 2 . 3/12/2009
Finally, a story that'll have a sad ending! Wooh!
So this chapter was all flashbacks right? Are they all going to be like that or was this just an intro?
Please update soon!
| KayCie - 2013ECO chapter 2 . 3/12/2009
this is good PLEASE continue please
| Gabbymasonpottercullen chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
im really intreged with this story and want to read more of it. there wasn't much detail about how or why edward left bella and i want to read more to find out why. i hope you keep writing and don't change how you write because it really reaches out to people and pulls on there heartstrings.
| WhiteLotus95 chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
Wow. Nice start. Can't wait to see where you'll take this story.
| imaginingInspiration chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
aw :( I feel so bad for bella. Very angsty :P well written
| kaitlyncullen chapter 2 . 8/22/2008
Whoa, i love it this story... its so emotional and its so deep. Good writing!
| Jennifer Lynn08 chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Awee. this definitely made my eyes water. cuz i know this feeling. wow. please update soon
|twelveoclock chapter 2 . 8/13/2008|