|Reviews for Averse Odium|
| OtterInTheHat chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
You''re not on deviantart anymore and I'm hopelessly addicted to your work so i came to find you here. This piece is amazing. the best thing I have ever read. no lie. its so wonderfully dark...I just can't even begin to describe how amazing it is!
| Masamune's Song chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Better than Canon!
See... I spent three books thinking THIS would be what happened if Edward got frisky, and so he had very good reason for not going for a roll in the hay. Turned out he was just being a ninny. DX
Really a very hot fic, if somewhat disturbing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
| ChaosOfFlames chapter 2 . 12/2/2008
I'm not going to lie that was kind of frightening but it still sucked me in and i read the whole thing. It was like oh my god i have to keep reading this even though it's terrifying. I don't know how else to describe it other than terrifyingly well written.
| Lila8171997 chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
oh MY gosh
amazing story, i can't believe what Edward did, if he didn't kill her, he wouldn't have to kill himself and everybody would be happy, why did he kill Bella...? , how come he couldn't just ASK her to make love? strange enough, she still loved him in the end. I liked that bit.
Overall I would give it a 7 or 8 out of 10 for maturity, and because I didn't want everybody to die.
| MTVicesk8r chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
this is probably the most COMPELLING thing i have read in the longest time.. although its quite different, it was so beautifully written.
absolutely heartbreaking but still beautiful :)
| Compassion001 chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
you have to write more! do you hear me? you have to!
| Totally deleting this chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Startledly amazing. Wow. Now that is what you call scary. On the dark black side of it; it was very good.
| Edward slept with Poison Akii chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I seem to find something morbidly addicting in this... i keep on reading it and reading it, and then i keep begging my friends to read it. I think this may be my favorite piece of yours yet. Its morbidly... delicous. I think that's an accurate term. Yes, i should say that's accurate for this.
Very much amazing, truly something non-traditional and non-expectant. I love how i still feel like he loves her, even after what he does to her, in the end. Very settling, dark ending.
| Daytime-dreamers chapter 2 . 10/15/2008
Oh god. I love this more than I hate it. It almost made me cry. Would you posibly do Bella's pov?
| TheTwilitNight chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
I really kinda liked the angst, but I just wished that there was a happier ending.
| the1andONLYlover chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
m... *shakes with fear and whimpers*
omg... I've never seen this side of Edward before...
never thought this could possibly happen..
I'm seriously shaking from this... it's so detailed and intricate... and so evil and sinister at the same time.. scary... XD
| L'Heure Rouge chapter 2 . 9/26/2008
I liked it except the part where Edward brutally kills Bella. Nice Job...well sort of.
| Inside the Box chapter 2 . 9/25/2008
Ohmygod. This story made me litrally cry ;_; It was so sad D: I liked it in a wierd way, but I truely don't understand why he killed her xD Even in NM, he knew he could have an "eternity" with her by bitting her xD ANYWAY. Very well written C: Thou shalt write more DarkFics! NAO!
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 2 . 9/15/2008
Masterful. Black. Pure.
Essential. Elemental. Macabre and revolutionary.
Brilliantly explored. Brilliantly handled.
| pupylover chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I'm almost sorry to admit that I really loved this!