Reviews for Averse Odium
Masamune's Song chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Better than Canon!

See... I spent three books thinking THIS would be what happened if Edward got frisky, and so he had very good reason for not going for a roll in the hay. Turned out he was just being a ninny. DX

Really a very hot fic, if somewhat disturbing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
ChaosOfFlames chapter 2 . 12/2/2008
I'm not going to lie that was kind of frightening but it still sucked me in and i read the whole thing. It was like oh my god i have to keep reading this even though it's terrifying. I don't know how else to describe it other than terrifyingly well written.
Lila8171997 chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
oh MY gosh

amazing story, i can't believe what Edward did, if he didn't kill her, he wouldn't have to kill himself and everybody would be happy, why did he kill Bella...? , how come he couldn't just ASK her to make love? strange enough, she still loved him in the end. I liked that bit.

Overall I would give it a 7 or 8 out of 10 for maturity, and because I didn't want everybody to die.
MTVicesk8r chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
oh.

my.

goodness.

this is probably the most COMPELLING thing i have read in the longest time.. although its quite different, it was so beautifully written.

absolutely heartbreaking but still beautiful :)
Compassion001 chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
you have to write more! do you hear me? you have to!
Sapphire Mizu chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Startledly amazing. Wow. Now that is what you call scary. On the dark black side of it; it was very good.
Edward slept with Poison Akii chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I seem to find something morbidly addicting in this... i keep on reading it and reading it, and then i keep begging my friends to read it. I think this may be my favorite piece of yours yet. Its morbidly... delicous. I think that's an accurate term. Yes, i should say that's accurate for this.

Very much amazing, truly something non-traditional and non-expectant. I love how i still feel like he loves her, even after what he does to her, in the end. Very settling, dark ending.
Daytime-dreamers chapter 2 . 10/15/2008
Oh god. I love this more than I hate it. It almost made me cry. Would you posibly do Bella's pov?
TheTwilitNight chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
I really kinda liked the angst, but I just wished that there was a happier ending.
the1andONLYlover chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
m... *shakes with fear and whimpers*

O.O .

omg... I've never seen this side of Edward before...

never thought this could possibly happen..

*SHIVERS*

I'm seriously shaking from this... it's so detailed and intricate... and so evil and sinister at the same time.. scary... XD
L'Heure Rouge chapter 2 . 9/26/2008
I liked it except the part where Edward brutally kills Bella. Nice Job...well sort of.
Inside the Box chapter 2 . 9/25/2008
Ohmygod. This story made me litrally cry ;_; It was so sad D: I liked it in a wierd way, but I truely don't understand why he killed her xD Even in NM, he knew he could have an "eternity" with her by bitting her xD ANYWAY. Very well written C: Thou shalt write more DarkFics! NAO!
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 2 . 9/15/2008
Masterful. Black. Pure.

Essential. Elemental. Macabre and revolutionary.

Brilliantly explored. Brilliantly handled.

Brilliantly written.
pupylover chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I'm almost sorry to admit that I really loved this!
iamawickedchild chapter 2 . 9/8/2008
WOW!

just ... WOW!i like dark fics, i dont know why, but i really like this one, at the beggining it kinda remaind me of another fic "Eat me Alive", (its a compliment! trust me!) Edward there was very sadistic, just like this one, you should read it! its really great, just like this one!

i can trully understand his madness, his excesive love for her...i have no idea how to explain it, its too difficult, but i understand.

LOVED IT! original and beautiful!
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