|Reviews for For some, being a child, is no excuse|
| LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
I believe it!
hehe, there are a bunch of 7-year-old Narutos. (Guess he went nuts on the shadow doppleganger jutsu, LOL)
| Dragoncl chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
As usual, beautiful. It wasn't as angsty as you had made it out to be.
The characterizations were very well done. Its sad how only the Hokage and Iruka sympathsize with Naruto. I think you did fine with the childish speech and writing. Over all, very realistic.
There were a few mistake sbut nothing major. In the seond paragraph I think it should 'surroundings' instead of 'surrounds' and meters instead of metres. Not bad for english being your second language. I could never do something like this in spanish.