Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
MistressMermaid chapter 35 . 10/16
I read this... and then realized it was on Hiatus. I am officially crying now! I got really into this story. Hasn't been updated in SO long! BOO! But also... yay? You're a really good writer. I highly enjoyed this Fan Fiction, so thank you.
sarae32 chapter 35 . 9/27
Great story and very detailed. It’s just a shame it’s not complete. Would have loved to see the ending
Debbie Hicks chapter 35 . 7/26
36. Powers
While then suddenly felt very diferen t ALIEEEN RSASTTLESNAKE VENOM Healed me theen blascking out you broke law that sc ar then a sudden force was growling then un der a full moon prepatring to phase on e second you die EXECUTED Then VEEEEENOMInto my heaerrttbeat then CHAN GED With bitten best frien ds this one a Lyc an to b e theen KILLED With them then the Setr found m y corpse was a Wolf's CARILISLE! Too late with them KILLED Then too k from us/them then then Blew frely then then was too late to save us then then PIERCED From here impaled then then suddenly too laate ATOMIZED Brought here they harbor a Laycassna
Child of the Moon Kingdom Werewolf both are Lyc an s then Execution then too late was deade by them then All of them are guilty then too late
MURDERED! but they were Skinned were as all of them killed but reported they hold her far too longer they are deadblew aspart bring them with as all of them then suddenly the Damages done to my heaslth then suddenly earned Pointed ears with Upswept eyebrows Alice's is not human at all Jaake yo infected her but transtioning her in to a Supernatural being with best friends that was it was Immortassl with my husband theen Alice she's not normal then myself had supersenses heighten sense of smell but enhanced superstrength and superspeed an d grace and beauty but a elegance So they were with as all then too late was no longer alive but Transformed then had a Migrane then Shielding Mentasl shield detected a plasnet power then my throasst burned was blood then so theirs they lost the color of their skin then then from the depths of my own mind Tel-Volice exploding Do you remember What I Taught you Imzadi c an you still sense my thoughts her mouth it's not Moving she's what Telepathic that was it first huin t theen as aall of most as aall of animals killed then too late dried up then Replaced with animal blood then were ass all of them PIERCED Freely tore from with implanted kids followed bring them then ATOMIZED! brought here then with the very remain s of as all killed into as biggest lab by now they reported dead at childbirth good bitten as all of themwith more then too late had eight were hybrids so they now too late saved from deasth then wasa Vegetarian so they then n ow too late myself was bitter then Nessie was in love with Jake was a halfling oh my god with the kids aged to adulthood you never age or die or haven't changed with them too late Asleep blew apart then With last ones then brought here found out had eight kids were immortal but too late bred in pon 'farr Jake proposed marriage then with them then had eight shocker then too late created a race then Jared went to the Gong suddenly we both yelled Kail'filee! Wore white so the best friends were Priestesses oh my god they had kids from that a very large Coven/pack unified was a alliance began a priesthood of Surak followed from the Kir'shara then too late was no longer humans were different SLICED From here popped brought here reported they are dead they will be killed sentenced to death by us officially then ATOMIZED! Ashes were as all of them then too late more as all of guards with our look/voices bitten freely that stopped procreation Seth went to the gong then This time Kail'fliee! from here fluently in the Vulcan language was Marriage or Challenge Challenged myself was a great-grandmother as the dawn of of our tomorrows for our days as it is today from the time of Awakening I Shall make my choice This One! pointed at my mate coldly without emotions embraced Kolinahr was a Acolyte of Mount Seleya located on Vulcan Sir! ashes were found but they are burnt to death but as all of Vampires born in Italy nuked of deadly blood is from Selene Captain she's wearing religious Vulcan jewelry head neck hands Oh my god she's what Vulcan as a priestess now too late the very as all of them reported she's with as all of with five on Vulcan both nuked with families as all of bring them now go then too late myself swore to their planetary gods/goddesses oh no he paled of Paul Lahote was my executor dressed in from Amok Time was a Trekker so Do I With Emmett were Trekkers with best friends were not alive gulp KROYKAH! Was Stop! or Enough! had religious Authority with ranks and titles Name Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar oh no she's a Vulcan woman Crap she is fluent in the Vulcan language oh my god she is very harsher icy cold good god man it's murderous that was it us/as all of them were exiled here waaah Atreyu he's hungry you delivered a baby learned from a webpage young lady did a deed me he's a toddler that was it aged to be 7 years of age had a tamed a Sehlat a real one oh no he's a man so the last kids.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/12
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!...I Haven't words...I just love this perfect fanfic so so so so much You're a S.M? We need more! You were been more than , our hearts need feel moreMore Edward and his loveI cant help falling in love. I beg you, write a sequel, a continuation...I'm begging
Guest chapter 35 . 6/25
I wish this was finished I loved this story . Wow just wow
Debbie Hicks chapter 35 . 4/23
36.
Marked
that suddenly both our katrs then suddenly a single but tiny voice Screanimig IMZADI! Her gasped the word touched his soul forever one and whole then then blacked out was marked as his imzadi mate then the alien Rattlesnake venom was still in my system, then weith bitten best you broke law what law i am his m ate his imzadi Fwelix Both broken the venom was stran ded blood was really poured then a loud noise then then then with the Venom heaviest of all of went to m y failing system Aliice helpo me then then ten my powers emerged too late then then aAFled then with the very as all of the very fiery side afteraffect then thern blown freely weith implanted kids eights then then with both with the others was attacked then then scream ing of the fully time official change they done this ten Blacked outside fled from here then brought here then m y chan ge came too late the venom then then too late skin turnede iciest coldest as ice then ten blown freeely Extinct then ten brought each both we report he consorterd with her but her deathj is real they broken law of newborns had only eight kids dead smasherd bring them here then too late ther pain weas far too hottest then suddenly my heart stopped pumping decomissioned offically then myself felt from the NASA Bodysuit from Buffy the Vampire slayer my sparkling but crystalized felt my own hand to my troatr blocking very differently Alice yoo hoo ABella yoo hoo you are a Mental shield with them due my horror Falkor's red eyesd my hair was longer with bangs Alice Bella oh my god she's what I Am really hungry it's Animals then hunted with them they with them the kids aged to adulthood had kids then Clamped frerely then ripped tore from pierced frhroats then brought here then suddenly punished then crunched freely then ten tore freely then buried them butr resurrected then Fled was out for blood then then as all of animals blown tore freely then So much then then then Lost from here were more as all of from as all of homes as all of them then Snapped from here then ripped freely then we find her punishedd for crimes of m urder then blew freely then slienced bring as all of them then clamped from humanity then then was not mortal at all Alice who did to her Volturi then myself hated what Became a Monster had struggled with the goddess Alice she's not human then in time then then blown Blew freely now gained a new look so they then was not alive they had her killed yes but reincarnated myself was glowing then blinding then BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! ANGELOS! TRANSFORM! Then too late was not alive then suddenly letting loose a trilling Xena Warrior princess 's war cry of vengeance with them then myself was not normal with venom then too late caused a chain reaction then Stood fiercer Athletic but fit stronger an d lethal but powerful by now as all of them were a race.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/17
Gross concept for a story, sorry. Nobody likes Jacob
harkie5 chapter 35 . 4/14
your story was amazing! Thank you for sharing!
Sidni101 chapter 35 . 3/14
Please update Please. This is one of the best Fanfiction I have read
mh21 chapter 35 . 2/9
This was lovely. So we'll written and sweet and romantic. 10/10 will read again. I hope theres a sequel, adding to my favorites.
Guest chapter 35 . 1/18
I'm not really much interested in twilight now but I absolutely loved this fic back in the day and it has honestly always stuck in my mind as one of the best fics I have read. so anyway, just wanted to say thanks for that x
analise17 chapter 27 . 9/4/2017
I had a nice good cry reading the last few chapters while listening to Secondhand Serenade's "It's Not Over." Thanks, I truly and sincerely needed a good cry. :'D
Guest chapter 19 . 6/27/2017
Oh what! Was that Sam imprinting! Holy moly!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/26/2017
Ugh you totally had me at the "what color are they" part. I so thought they were gonna kiss
Guest chapter 13 . 6/26/2017
Hahah glad she is out of her shell even if she didnt like to drink. Hmm and lucky Edward just so happened to show up huh. Yesss I can't wait for drunk Bella and Edward banter.
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