|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| lemonangeljuice chapter 35 . 11/1/2014
This story was one added to my read list from the NYC Twi-Fic meet up. I think it was mentioned by panel authors as a story they most wanted an update from. I loved the end of chapter 34. I think it is a romantic conclusion to this story and is the best place to jump to an epilogue. Thank you for the story!
| Cc chapter 6 . 10/24/2014
I really live your story and I am up to chapter 7 now. I like the concept of the story and think you at talented even I this your first one.
| esmegrace chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Oxy, I just got a random hankering to re-experience your fantastic story today. I just clicked on the reviews to see if people were still reading and saw the Guest review posted on 6/25. Please disregard that hateful garbage. What a coward to write something so vile anonymously. Your writing is fantastic, and I hope you are writing original stuff now or doing something even better with your life. I don't know if you still read these reviews, but if you don't, then I still want this here for other readers to see. And Guest, why did you read all 35 chapters if it was so bad? I wish you continued misery in your sad, little life.
| BatSpyder487 chapter 35 . 8/25/2014
After reading this, I really hope you haven't abandoned this story and get back to writing and updating it soon.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
As I've grown older, I've kinda lost interest in twilight bit I still love your fic!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Not off to a promising start are we?
| Guest chapter 35 . 6/24/2014
Actually your just not a good writer at all. Nothing new to say and what is said is poorly done. Plot is cliche & trope ridden. Pacing is at best inconsistent and the dialog is choppy and trite. Also your bias is glaringly obvious. This isnt a fleshed out story, its your mary sue world - and its one of the worst of a bunch of crappy twilight fanfics
I'm so thrilled you put this on hiatus as its beyond painful to read. Please find a new hobby. Writing is just not something your good at
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
The other day I was thinking through the canon Twilight, and I was racking my brain trying to figure out which part of the book the scene between Jacob, Billy, and Bella was in- where Bella defends the Cullens against Billy and calls him a bitter old man. Anyways, it took me quite a while to fully realize that it was in THIS story rather than the actual book. I like this better, actually. So naturally, I'm going to read it for like the 4th time.
| YellowFlowers1922 chapter 35 . 6/3/2014
When are you going to update? I like this story
| Marie Mermaids chapter 35 . 5/9/2014
I loved the story. Thank you. Wished there was more. You really should write more stories. Are there any of your stories in other platforms?
| Marie Mermaids chapter 7 . 5/9/2014
' reed propelled by the wind' and one legged rabbit. I so enjoyed that
| Katie chapter 35 . 5/6/2014
Please please please please please continue with this story. It's fantastic
| Guest chapter 35 . 4/17/2014
I loved your story. I found it interesting and addictive. THIS should have been the original Twilight story!
| bella-swan25 chapter 35 . 4/17/2014
Are you ever going to finish this story?
| Tandr23 chapter 35 . 4/17/2014
do you plan to continue?