Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
Rasa.Ra chapter 25 . 4/20/2011
I'm shocked. I can't believe that Edward didn't sucumb to his real feelings. That he was scared to go there. That he chose to run away. I could see that later. But not there in the woods when Bella confessed her uncondition love for him. I know he hates himself but I was hoping he would just grab her and hold her. But of course it's Edward we're talking here. He thinks she can't love him the way he does and that it will go away for her, because she is just human. Anyway. I'm disappointed in him but not surprised. And my heart is breaking for Bella. I'm sorry for Jake but in her place I would do the same. I would let him go. It's not fear to continue if she can't love him the way he deserves to be loved. Love this story.
Rasa.Ra chapter 22 . 4/20/2011
At last! At last we're going deeper. I loved how Bella defended Cullens. It's so natural. But it shows how much she cares. I wonder how much longer till Jakes change and how much longer he will be in the dark of Bellas feelings. It's so obvious, that something is different.
Rasa.Ra chapter 14 . 4/19/2011
Well well, I think things are going to get interesting:) lol I love some drama. Sorry Jake:) I wonder if this meeting will trigger Jakes change? That would so complicate things:) and I would love that *evil laugh*
Rasa.Ra chapter 13 . 4/19/2011
I like this chapter. It's so in Bellas character to fight the cliches and labels that others are trying to tag her with. I loved that she started to fight it all. And the drinking.. I can see that just because it was at the right time and right place. The escape was there and she took it. I'm just surprised that Edward saved her. And it wasn't anything major. And probably nobody saw it. Anyway. I like the pace of this story. That you're not rushing it. I'm really enjoying it :)
ashleighalexanderX chapter 11 . 3/31/2011
aww : how cute are bellaedward 8- xxxxxxxxx
ashleighalexanderX chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
i hope edward comes into the story soon :D bellajacob are jusd too weird together :) xxxxx
JustToLetYouKnow chapter 35 . 3/12/2011
:) I like the ending, I mean I know it's just on hiatus but I was scared when I started reading it (which I had to do because I kept seeing it on story favourites...) that it would end on a cliffhanger :/

But they are together and I can make up the rest of the story (aka Jacob went to the north pole, bella was changed and all the cullens went to Dartmouth, Charlie and Sue Clearwater got together and Seth and Leah both found their true loves *insert the 'awww' here*)

So I am putting it on alert (in hope that it is continued!) and favourites (because it was just that good!)
JustToLetYouKnow chapter 28 . 3/12/2011
I wasn't going to review until the end and you probably won't read this because you're on hiatus but that chapter was... well let's just say I feel like I could have just had a heart attack it was that breaktakingly good!
4Ever-Twilight-Luva chapter 35 . 3/10/2011
I likey! PLEASE UPDATE! :DD
potteward chapter 35 . 2/2/2011
what a story i was unable to stop reading so i had to lie to my mom that i was studying for an interview excellent job why don't you complete the story or else start a new story with same theme
Fullofpassion09 chapter 35 . 2/1/2011
I love the liberties you took while still keeping true to the baser parts. Your right from your a/n's it did take a twilight turn in several spots but I see the necessity to your plot. Are you planning to finish this story on here or are you posting elsewhere? Thanks for sharing your work!
Sook03 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
The best of luck to them.
ilovecarlisle1 chapter 17 . 1/26/2011
This has been absolutely fabulous so far! I am hanging on every word! This was your first fanfiction? You are a fabulous writer! I can't wait to finish it!
Manelli Swan chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
finish this story.

you know it's the best on fanfic.
RaquelnJake chapter 21 . 1/13/2011
One of my favorite chapters! I love re-reading your story. I love it!
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