Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
ashleighalexanderX chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
i hope edward comes into the story soon :D bellajacob are jusd too weird together :) xxxxx
JustToLetYouKnow chapter 35 . 3/12/2011
:) I like the ending, I mean I know it's just on hiatus but I was scared when I started reading it (which I had to do because I kept seeing it on story favourites...) that it would end on a cliffhanger :/

But they are together and I can make up the rest of the story (aka Jacob went to the north pole, bella was changed and all the cullens went to Dartmouth, Charlie and Sue Clearwater got together and Seth and Leah both found their true loves *insert the 'awww' here*)

So I am putting it on alert (in hope that it is continued!) and favourites (because it was just that good!)
JustToLetYouKnow chapter 28 . 3/12/2011
I wasn't going to review until the end and you probably won't read this because you're on hiatus but that chapter was... well let's just say I feel like I could have just had a heart attack it was that breaktakingly good!
4Ever-Twilight-Luva chapter 35 . 3/10/2011
potteward chapter 35 . 2/2/2011
what a story i was unable to stop reading so i had to lie to my mom that i was studying for an interview excellent job why don't you complete the story or else start a new story with same theme
Fullofpassion09 chapter 35 . 2/1/2011
I love the liberties you took while still keeping true to the baser parts. Your right from your a/n's it did take a twilight turn in several spots but I see the necessity to your plot. Are you planning to finish this story on here or are you posting elsewhere? Thanks for sharing your work!
Sook03 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
The best of luck to them.
ilovecarlisle1 chapter 17 . 1/26/2011
This has been absolutely fabulous so far! I am hanging on every word! This was your first fanfiction? You are a fabulous writer! I can't wait to finish it!
Manelli S chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
finish this story.

you know it's the best on fanfic.
RaquelnJake chapter 21 . 1/13/2011
One of my favorite chapters! I love re-reading your story. I love it!
RaquelnJake chapter 11 . 1/6/2011
I love when he teases her!
RaquelnJake chapter 9 . 1/6/2011
Re-reading your story becaues I miss it so much. You story is so beautiful and I hope you come back to it soon.
StarsWithoutNight chapter 35 . 1/6/2011

Almost every single fic I've read so far has been so predictable that its almost nausiating but I continue because I am unabashedly addicted to Edward fluff! But your story threw me for a loop in almost every chapter keeping me up most the night not only reading but dwelling on the angsty feelings of the characters far too much. I hate and root for this Bella at the same time. SM made her such a floor-graveling doormat for Edward that I seriously want to smack some spicegirl-power into her head and tell her he at least needed a rightous bitchslap for the shit he pulled in new moon. But your Bella had a head on her and went for what she wanted and punished those who hurt her. I did hate, absolutly loath what she did to Jacob because I am a fan of giving everyone at least a shot at getting what they sincerely desire but I do realize their relationship needed to end somewhere to make way for Edward.(Edward is always first on my list)

I can see where you started getting bored with this story (the excruciatingly detailed thoughts and feelings of Bella) and I dont hate you for it. You at least got through the first kiss and thats my favorite part (where he pulls her to him and grabs her hips and claims her...ya) so I can live with the unfinished story. It just seemed like you were trying to prolong and drag out the inevitable and it was becoming annoyingly painful so way to stop while you were ahead. (Plz excuse my bluntness)

I know you probably wont even read this review but i just had to convey my admiration for the freshness of your tale. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Feenrai chapter 35 . 1/3/2011
Fantastic! I really loved this! Thank you for sharing it :D
Feenrai chapter 26 . 1/2/2011
I'm sorry I'm not a veryconsistent's a mixture of being too absrbed in such a captivatingly well written story, and reading it from a device that is xcruciatingly hard to "type" on...that said your story is far too good for me to justify putting off another review any longer.

As I said,your writing is exceptional! You capture emotions in the characters so well and you detail the surrounding events so believably that it is impossible not to get sucked in. This chapter is a perfect example. I once did to a boy what Bella did to Jacob. He was wonderfully sweet and completly in love with me but I realized I wasn't in love with him...this chapter perfectly captured the flurry of painful, angsty emotions we felt when I broke up with him.

Superb job and fantastic story...thank you!
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