|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| Fee-Sha16 chapter 35 . 12/10/2010
FANTASTICALLY AWESOME STORY! GREAT JOB!D
| singtomemuse chapter 35 . 12/8/2010
This was the very first fic I ever read, and to this day, it remains my favorite even though you don't update anymore. I just wanted you to know that I will always hold out for this story and this Edward and Bella. Thanks so much for writing this, and even though I hope you'll finish it one day, I understand that you might not. This is definitely not one of those mean comments accusing you of not updating, just wanted to let you know how much I admire you and like this fic.
| sazxx chapter 35 . 12/4/2010
amazing! I love this story :D
| LeeseeQ chapter 26 . 11/28/2010
The tension in this story is amazing! I'm hanging on your every word!
| LeeseeQ chapter 18 . 11/28/2010
I love this slow build- it's awesome!
| LeeseeQ chapter 12 . 11/28/2010
Enough with the negative talk! This story is great and the pacing and back story are perfect and the writing is very engaging. While I'm reading it I'm immersed in the story, not thinking about why isn't Edward with Bella yet. If we didn't have all this foundation the story wouldn't mean nearly as much. I'm loving it, keep up the good work.
| LeeseeQ chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
I didn't realize how many parallels to Romeo and Juliet were in the Twilight story. I knew that New Moon was roughly based on it, but I didn't know that it was present even in some of the details of the story. And your line at the end about murdering a rabbit was hysterical, I laughed out loud.
| LeeseeQ chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
No apologies necessary! I think the story is great so far and the pacing seems just right. I like all the detail of how things would have gone if Edward had never been there the first year. You really thought out the details and it shows!
| Meeghan Laird chapter 35 . 11/27/2010
I think I have asked you this before: is this the last chapter?
| mznative133 chapter 10 . 11/27/2010
sasquatch or 'big foot' isnt dangerous in the north west so...yeah just lettin u kno haha:)
| TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 35 . 11/27/2010
this is soooo good. the character are so like s. m. ones can't wait for next chapter.
| Meeghan Laird chapter 28 . 11/27/2010
I know you wrote this quite some time ago, but I was wondering if you had heard of the meaning of 'fine'?
| Molly Dooker chapter 8 . 11/8/2010
your writing really flows. smoothly from one point to another observation.
| Molly Dooker chapter 7 . 11/8/2010
some lovely dovely gushy mushy goodness.
| Molly Dooker chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
loving Bella's mental commentary.