|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| LeeseeQ chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
I didn't realize how many parallels to Romeo and Juliet were in the Twilight story. I knew that New Moon was roughly based on it, but I didn't know that it was present even in some of the details of the story. And your line at the end about murdering a rabbit was hysterical, I laughed out loud.
| LeeseeQ chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
No apologies necessary! I think the story is great so far and the pacing seems just right. I like all the detail of how things would have gone if Edward had never been there the first year. You really thought out the details and it shows!
| Ellie Aluinn chapter 35 . 11/27/2010
I think I have asked you this before: is this the last chapter?
| mznative133 chapter 10 . 11/27/2010
sasquatch or 'big foot' isnt dangerous in the north west so...yeah just lettin u kno haha:)
| TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 35 . 11/27/2010
this is soooo good. the character are so like s. m. ones can't wait for next chapter.
| Ellie Aluinn chapter 28 . 11/27/2010
I know you wrote this quite some time ago, but I was wondering if you had heard of the meaning of 'fine'?
| Molly Dooker chapter 8 . 11/8/2010
your writing really flows. smoothly from one point to another observation.
| Molly Dooker chapter 7 . 11/8/2010
some lovely dovely gushy mushy goodness.
| Molly Dooker chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
loving Bella's mental commentary.
| Molly Dooker chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
this story itself is far from ordinary.
| Molly Dooker chapter 4 . 11/8/2010
teeny, tiny little typo located in the last sentence.
"I made my way into the bathroom. As I brushed my teeth, I couldsn't help but think that there was no way my senior year could get any stranger than today."
| Molly Dooker chapter 3 . 11/8/2010
i still remember reading this for the first time. i clicked on the title link, and as they say, the rest is history.
| Molly Dooker chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
and Bella comes to their defense. ]
| Molly Dooker chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
i love how you've expanded this concept from a quote. it's really in the fine print, isn't it?
| Molly Dooker chapter 21 . 11/8/2010
banana flavouring... *shudder*. it's just so... yellow.