Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
LeeseeQ chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
I didn't realize how many parallels to Romeo and Juliet were in the Twilight story. I knew that New Moon was roughly based on it, but I didn't know that it was present even in some of the details of the story. And your line at the end about murdering a rabbit was hysterical, I laughed out loud.
LeeseeQ chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
No apologies necessary! I think the story is great so far and the pacing seems just right. I like all the detail of how things would have gone if Edward had never been there the first year. You really thought out the details and it shows!
Ellie Aluinn chapter 35 . 11/27/2010
I think I have asked you this before: is this the last chapter?
mznative133 chapter 10 . 11/27/2010
umm yeah

sasquatch or 'big foot' isnt dangerous in the north west so...yeah just lettin u kno haha:)
TwilightandCanadaforever chapter 35 . 11/27/2010
this is soooo good. the character are so like s. m. ones can't wait for next chapter.

Ellie Aluinn chapter 28 . 11/27/2010
I know you wrote this quite some time ago, but I was wondering if you had heard of the meaning of 'fine'?

Freaked out,


Neurotic and

Molly Dooker chapter 8 . 11/8/2010
your writing really flows. smoothly from one point to another observation.
Molly Dooker chapter 7 . 11/8/2010
some lovely dovely gushy mushy goodness.
Molly Dooker chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
loving Bella's mental commentary.
Molly Dooker chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
this story itself is far from ordinary.
Molly Dooker chapter 4 . 11/8/2010
teeny, tiny little typo located in the last sentence.

"I made my way into the bathroom. As I brushed my teeth, I couldsn't help but think that there was no way my senior year could get any stranger than today."
Molly Dooker chapter 3 . 11/8/2010
i still remember reading this for the first time. i clicked on the title link, and as they say, the rest is history.
Molly Dooker chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
and Bella comes to their defense. ]
Molly Dooker chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
i love how you've expanded this concept from a quote. it's really in the fine print, isn't it?
Molly Dooker chapter 21 . 11/8/2010
banana flavouring... *shudder*. it's just so... yellow.
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